October 23rd, 2013 at 06:17am
Without Warning - Comments
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I hope the next update comes soon!October 23rd, 2013 at 04:30am
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Kennedy, I want to punch you so hard right now. What a dick move. It's not like John got with HIS girl. I'm sure Pat is totally fine with the fact that Everly called it off. I'm sure Pat wouldn't have wanted ANYONE to get hurt and now Kennedy is hurting everyone he can. Ugh.
I loved this update. <3
Can't wait to see what happens next!October 16th, 2013 at 12:42am -
Kennedy you asshole, poor John i feel so bad for him :( He really likes her :( And sorry you got the song stuck in your head hahaha!October 15th, 2013 at 10:31pm
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OH NO! WHYYYYYYYYYYYYY KENNEDY?!?! I understand he doesn't trust John anymore and thinks his sister will just get hurt again like whatever happened to Joel before, so I don't blame him because the bet would be discovered someday. Now John will be an asshole again and she will leave tour, both hurt... Oh no, I can't accept this she has to stay and show him her feelings were true, they might have grown of a bet, but they don't exist just because of it.October 15th, 2013 at 04:07pm
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Johnnnnnnn. Well I'm guessing he'll fall back into old habits now that this has happened. So good, can't wait for the next update, I want to see how Everly deals with it!October 15th, 2013 at 11:12am
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awawawaw nope, didn't need my heart, thanks.October 15th, 2013 at 06:51am
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I'm crying for poor John. And damn it Kennedy! I could just punch him right now.October 15th, 2013 at 05:47am
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Joooooohhhhnnnnnn!!!!! My poor baby!!! I wonder if she's ganna leave the tour or if she's ganna stay? I hope she stays!!! I need to find out what happens ASAP!! Please!!!October 15th, 2013 at 04:56am
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this makes me sad cause they were so cute when they were happy togetherOctober 15th, 2013 at 03:24am
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We can all feel how badly this is going to end when John finds out, and I'm dreading the thought. Hopefully he'll hear it from Evie, if not... Shit will hit the fan. I LIKE THIS!October 12th, 2013 at 12:15pm
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@ frankieraepain
Yes, that could have been my plan all along...October 11th, 2013 at 02:52am -
I'm thinking that either John is going to overhear Everly's conversation with Kennedy or Kennedy is going to get so upset that he tells John the plan. I don't want things to get bad though because they are just so cute together.October 11th, 2013 at 02:39am
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@ dreamingyouhere
I can't say I'm not happy that you can't. But that's really what giving feed back really is. Telling an author when they accidentally make a mistake. It's all good. I love finding those little mistakes. Makes me think you are putting them there as like a subliminal message. It's so fun and now I want to read the other story with Jenna, if I'm not already.October 10th, 2013 at 03:12am -
I can't write anything about this chapter because I died drowned in a sea of cuteness. I want to cry because I know even if Kennedy is okay with ending the plan, John will find out somehow and it will break his heart :(October 9th, 2013 at 07:47pm
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Seriously though, I'm so in love with this John I have this feeling I'm already blinded by his charm :( Don't hurt us JohnOctober 9th, 2013 at 06:20pm
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Your stories leave me so anxious..... like what the hell will happen next jesus I can't take the suspense. don't make me break down into Mary J Blige's "No more drama" gurl!October 9th, 2013 at 06:18pm
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well damn. i'm looking foward to seeing kenny's reaction, this should be good lolOctober 9th, 2013 at 12:28pm
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John is just so freaking AGGGGHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!! In this chapter! He's too cute, man!!! I can't cope with the feels! I legitamitely fell in love with this chapter! I can't wait to read how Kenny will react!October 9th, 2013 at 05:15am
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@ frankieraepain
...ok, I found it and fixed it. I feel like I can't write this story without you now....hahaOctober 9th, 2013 at 03:14am
I loved this chapter a lot. The way Garrett was in attack mode was wonderful!!
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