Misery Business - Comments

*This is from comment swap. *
Wow, talk about suspenseful! I love the layout, the plot so far, the suspense, everything! I started reading it, and I can just saw that I'm absolutely hooked to it! I've read a million mystery stories on here, and I think it's official to say that I've never read something alike yours. I love it, good luck! xx.

I love the suspense! Ive always been a big fan of mystery/ actiony stories and so far, this one tops the list. The way you describe the way someone talks is really moving. It inspires me to become a better write, and i'm not kidding! definitely subscribing!

"as long as it was stated to do so in the instructions, of course." I loved that! I really liked this chapter althoughi wish it were a little longer just so I can see how their first mission goes, but I definitely look forward to the next chapter. :)

I'm more of short stories person, but I've got to confess that this is gripping! I think it was a great idea for you two to collaborate, because in that way, your characters will truly be nothing alike. I can't wait to read about their first mission :>

I'm more of short stories person, but I've got to confess that this is gripping! I think it was a great idea for you two to collaborate, because in that way, your characters will truly be nothing alike. I can't wait to read about their first mission :>

In just the first chapter, I can't help but love Patience! (Such a perfect name for her too). I really wasn't expecting much when the comment swap matched me to your story, but I've been proven wrong. :) I can't wait to see how things go between Patience and Aubree. Definitely subscribing. :)