Poppyfields - Comments

@ laredo.
Hello :)

Thanks for all of your sweet comments! They mean so much to me!
As for the way it was written, I took script form and transformed it in my own way, adding the countless details that I always seem to include in any of my stories, hahah! I just wanted the reader to have a better image in their heads of how exactly the characters were reacting, considering that aspect usually seems to be excluded from regular script/play form. :)

And about the ending, I could tell you what it means, but that might ruin the fun of predicting what exactly it means, hahahah!

Thanks again, though! :)

What I really liked about this story was that it was written in such a unique way. I had never seen a story written in a script form like that and I actually kind of liked it that way.

Especially with this being in script form, you characterized the characters in their dialogue very well, so that was really nice to see.

It was fresh and intriguing, and it was like I was seeing a play being performed. I'm still a bit confused after reading it, but I suppose that's a good thing. I like how the story makes you think about what you just read.

This was really nice. Good job with this story.

@ Diligence
Hello there :)

I'm quite sorry about the summary page being difficult to read! I just edited it, though, so that the words are bigger and easier to read :)

On the other hand, thank you SO much for your kind words!! I'm very glad that you enjoyed reading this story, hahah! :D As for inspiration, the lyrics of the song that I posted on the summary page with the musical note really helped giving me this idea for the story. Other than that, I was motivated to just write anything considering I had not written much in a long time (with the exception of one other story), and because I was desperate to try a new writing technique which I've wanted to do for such a long time. :)

But thank you, once again! It means a lot that you liked my story!

I like the layout, I like how it all fits together well but the dark brown on the red really contrasts and it's hard for me to make out the words (especially if they're so small) while the colors are so conflicting. I had to tilt my lappy in a few different directions and squint to be able to read it. I was happy moving into the story that the text was black.

This story was unlike anything I've ever read, honestly. I don't even know where to begin really. It was so new to me and fresh, and I saw everything as if it were right in front of me. I hope you check these comments soon, i'd like to know, what was your inspiration?

@ Mark Hoppus
Thank you :)

Yeah, I wanted to test out a new layout style, but you were right when you said the box was too small, hahah!
And I also used a different writing technique. So I could see how it'd be kind of difficult to read, as well. :)

the story is very good, it was just hard to read. c:

@ Mark Hoppus
Oh, all right! Thanks for the preference :)
I'll change it now!

you should probably fix the layout on this story... make the box wider...