i really love the layout. the banner itself is something readers can relate to and just looking at this gives me a serene sort of feeling. onto the real content, then!
the first chapter is amazing. your writing skills, especially in first person p.o.v, is something i'm actually jealous of since i can't pull it off at all. the main fact that the main character is shunned and seen as an outcast is something i can definitely relate to. just the ending piece though, with luke coming in and wanting to work together. it was so cute.
i really love the layout. the banner itself is something readers can relate to and just looking at this gives me a serene sort of feeling. onto the real content, then!
the first chapter is amazing. your writing skills, especially in first person p.o.v, is something i'm actually jealous of since i can't pull it off at all. the main fact that the main character is shunned and seen as an outcast is something i can definitely relate to. just the ending piece though, with luke coming in and wanting to work together. it was so cute.