This was very cute and I love Bergie! I think people forget him lol Using the two songs was creative I got a little confused with the groupings, mostly the 2nd one; I had to reread it a few times to realize it was a flashback...then I realized you kind of stated it was and felt dumb...yeahhhhhh lol I did like that the 3rd grouping started with the headline about hte NHL...that I understood lol There were some grammar mistakes, but not many. The tense did shift from time to time, so just watch that. A lot of people do that, I do...it's my pet peeve with writing, but I know it happens lol The winners should be posted on the contest page in the next couple of hours, so go check it out :)
Using the two songs was creative
I got a little confused with the groupings, mostly the 2nd one; I had to reread it a few times to realize it was a flashback...then I realized you kind of stated it was and felt dumb...yeahhhhhh lol
I did like that the 3rd grouping started with the headline about hte NHL...that I understood lol
There were some grammar mistakes, but not many. The tense did shift from time to time, so just watch that. A lot of people do that, I do...it's my pet peeve with writing, but I know it happens lol
The winners should be posted on the contest page in the next couple of hours, so go check it out :)