Finding Atlas - Comments

angsty atlas yes please

atlas bby what happened to you
love love loved this chapter
:)

sexy angsty atlas all the way man all the way AS IF THIS IS EVEN A QUESTION sexy > non sexy js
oh i forgot the other question hmm
oh YES when atlas said he fell apart when he saw andro was that she was so flipping sexy and fabulous that when he saw her he was like 'oh shit gurl i can't even rn' or you know, something more angsty and less swagalicious
you're making me really want to try hot choc with honey
and you're fab

oh wow I SHIP THEM SO HARD
and you are the best at describing things like i'm actually very, very jealous of you rn
this is so perf, as always

Oh my gosh - SEXY ANGSTY ATLAS FOR SURE!
Holding hands is always adorable. I loved it so much. I swooned.
Cocoa with honey? OMG too cute. Just too cute.
And them sitting together? Even cuter. I'm dying with all the sweetness going on.
I don't think Andromeda is being a hypocrite. I think that she is trying to stay strong but she's falling apart, too. Seeing him fall apart is going to make her feel closer to doing the same, I think. I could be wrong. Maybe she'll stay strong for Atlas, though.
They're gonna pull the plug on his father?? Oh my gosh, so sad.
Don't do that!
I think that what Atlas meant by falling apart when he saw her was that he fell for her hard the moment he saw her.
At least, I hope that's what it means.

1. Hmmm..... 7?
2. A little bit, yep ;)
3. Mhmm!
4. So sad :(

ALEXANDRA, I AM FREAKING OUT RN OKAY
So you see, in my story, the one I've been saying is so similar to this one, RIGHT AFTER THE BOY STARTS CRYING THE GIRL STARTS CRYING AND THEN THEY KISS AND THEN THEY DECIDED TO JUST BE FRIENDS BUT THE GIRL IS CONFLICTED AND
WE
ARE
WRITING/
HAVE
WRITTEN
THE
SAME
STORIES
I know you haven't read mine so it's not plagiarism at all
BUT THIS IS SO CREEPY OMG

Oh wow that really was awkward but still a good chapter update soon

holy crap, first, I love your writing style. It's really engaging and a ton of fun. Second, I love your author's notes, they add so much to the story and make it that much more entertaining, and in some ways real (if that's the right word) so, 1. not the most awkward first kiss, definitely the most awkward response to a first kiss. 2. WTF NO 3. I HOPE IT'S THAT EASY BUT I BET IT'S NOT NO NO NO.

i just read this entire story and OH MY GOD
i am in love with atlas like holy cow omg
this is so perf i love it omg

Oh man! I figured it must be something like that with his dad but I wasn't sure. Poor Atlas. Actually just poor everyone (except his mother).
AND OH MY GOD THEY KISSED???? WHAT IN THE ACTUAL EFF?
So awkward. Oh man. So awkward but so good at the same time.
I want more of the kisses but less of the tears, okay? Okay.

1. That makes A LOT more sense than what I guessed ;)
2. Hmmm... idk. I'm not so sure about either of them, really.

P.S. I have no clue what you were talking about when you apologized for that analogy. I honestly thought it was beautiful. Like, hands down, an amazing analogy.

oh dear
poor andromeda

aw that's sad
weird that both she and Atlas have problems at home
I SEE THEM GETTING CLOSER BECAUSE OF IT

OMG THIS CAN'T BE OKAY
OKAY JUST TELL HER OMG
whhhyyyyyy ahhhhh i just cant
AHHHHH OH NO NANA :((((
where's atlas to comfort her omg
gosh why did her dad keep it from her???
omg the mother/daughter moment!
grace is just so sweet and perf yeah c:
uggggh WHERE IS ATLAS TO HUG HER WHEN YOU NEED HIM

1. that analogy was perfect okay and ilysm
2. AT THE MOMENT, YES LMAO. but what's up with her dad yo?

The mug analogy wasn't lame at all! I liked it, and I'm favoring her mother, but I feel where her father was coming from, but Andromeda isn't weak at all, so it was probably just a father not wanting his daughter in pain. I just thought she'd be really sick, I didn't expect her to die :c Update soon!

I'm so sad that I had called that right. Poor thing.
But I totally get your analogy so maybe I'm weird? I don't know. I liked it.
I think I understand why her father would try to shield her - my parents did that to me a lot when I was growing up and even into high school. They left things out and neglected to tell me things they thought would upset me. So I think that I understand her father even if his actions weren't right I think he had good intentions. But it's good to see her having a moment with her mom even though the roles should be reversed.
I'm super fascinated by this story and I can't wait to see what happens next with it.

WHY WOULD YOU STOP THE CHAPTER THERE.
WHY.
Atlas meeting the parents-- awks.
Hahahah I bet they were like "the fuck is this ratchet?"
Oh lawd and he was left hangin'...
The 'rents probs don't want to be touchin' peasant hands. Laaaaaaawd. The struggle of being a coffee boi.

1. No expectations, no disappointments.
2. SHE'S ADOPTED. OR NANA DEAD.
3. Hmm, yes indeed. Very interested.

And you were in Vegas? Shoot, I love Vegas! What hotel did you stay in!?

CRYING ABOUT ALL OF THIS OKAY CAN YOU FUCKING STOP
FIRST OF ALL, PRINCESS IN THE FROG SO FREEEEAKING PERF WHAT THE BALLLSSSS why did I say that who am I as a person
THIS IS TOO MUCH okay SECOND of all LITTLE SISTERS OMFg stoooooooop
and bone crushing hugs and Atlas and aw

AHHHH SHE'S HAVING FEELINGS ABOUT ATLAS
she's nervous omg she likes him ahhhhh <333
ooh snap! tell her what???!?!?
ATLAS IS MEETING THE PARENTS
okay, this is so fast i love it
SCORE FOR ANDROMEDA
i wonder what Delphine will think about this.....
but Atlas and Andromeda are perfect together :)
sweet lil Grace :D
WHAT IS GOING ON HERE???

1. no i didn't expect that. like, what are you doing to us????
2. I DONT KNOW WHAT THEY'D TELL HER. Maybe an accident has happened to her grandmother :( or how her grandma's getting remarried?? idkkkk haha
3. yah man! what's up with her daddyoo? i want an explanation in the next chapter pls :)

1. I didn't necessarily "see it coming", but there's always drama, so it wasn't really a surprise.
2. He's gay. No, wait, her mom said something about her grandmother. Her grandmother is her real mother. No. Wait. Her grandmother died before she was born and the lady who she thinks is her grandmother is just some lady they picked up off the street. That has to be it.
3. I'm a little shocked by that, yeah.

ILYSM TOO AND YOU'RE THE ONE THAT'S PERF K THX BYE