Fall Into Me - Comments

This is from comment swap and this is really good. i loved all chapters and i loved the layot and everything. i also loved brantly and jo, they seem so sweet together and i loved the beginning where they were in his car talking and evrything well done writing it xxxxx

Omg I love BG pleaaaassseeeee update this !!!!!

Awww, this is so cute! I don't listen to country, but my cousin does all the time, which is why I know who Brantley is! I hope you continue this, I really wanna see the rest unfold! They'd be such a cute couple. What a gentleman he is. :)

Please keep writing this!!! There has to be more stories like this on here!!

Please continue! I have searched the entire site for something like this and have honestly thought of starting my own for Florida Georgia Line, however I was worried how people would respond. But yours, wow, blew me out of the water! I feel like you've got a great plot going so please continue! :)

Thanks!

@ spanklove93
This link should help you. http://www.mibba.com/Forums/Topic/167680/How-do-you-change-font-stuff-italics-bold-underline-IN-STORIES/#message-11332113

Does anybody know how to change the font of like, a few sentences on here? Like bold and italian?

I loved chapters 2 and 3. The story seems to be progressing well and you've already improved greatly. Keep it up! :)

Via Comment Swap!

So I usually hate reading these types of stories but after reading yours I sort of fell in love with it. I love the southern theme to it and I'm curious to how it goes. Also you're dialogue, something I'm stickler about, is really good. You describe what is being said perfectly and the conversation flows. The only thing I had some problems with was the capitalization issues. There are some mistakes here and there and I'm guessing it's just errors you made while typing which is okay because we all do it. As I noted before, I really enjoyed reading this story. I won't necessarily subscribe but the story idea and plot is pretty good. Please don't be one of those people who stops because they lose the fuel that powers them to write. You have great potential. =) Anyways keep writing and good job! This story was written pretty well!!!

Sincerely,
red981456

I really like how you have a different banner for every chapter; thats a nice idea. I also like the country-type feeling I get when I read this story; I have not found many such as this one. I also like how you put pictures in the story so the reader can get a real feel for Jo's surroundings. I also think its funny how much Jo loves her truck. and i think that brantley will be a big part of the story later on ;).

-Comment Swap-
Really enjoyed reading this, the dialogue seems pretty believable and you don't focus too much on the description OR completely ignore it. Only thing I’d change is perhaps going through and capitalizing the ‘I’s, but that’s because my boyfriend’s a grammar nazi and it’s rubbing off with me. Definitely subscribing though :)

Yeah my shift button doesn't work very often. Fixed all the bugs though, thanks for the feedback!

Yeah my shift button doesn't work very often. Fixed all the bugs though, thanks for the feedback!

Comment swap~

So I really loved the first chapter and I'm actually going to subscribe. But, the only thing I do have to mention is your lack of capitalization. there were several sentences that didn't start with a capital and almost all of your "I"s weren't capitalized. Other than that I really loved the story.