Charm - Comments

Wow their relationship is very complicated

Loved this chapter. The way Callum kind of wigs out over Lacy is so... nice. Like it shows he really cares. I can't help but be curious about their past and why he's so apprehensive. I did spot a couple mistakes (I know you said you didn't proofread so I just wanna help you so you're not sat half an hour scanning it. ) When Lacy is having a small freak out about Callum's whereabouts, instead of road you have rode. And then when he comes in with the grocery bangs on his arms you have rose instead of rows. Otherwise I didn't see any mistakes! This story is already too good!

I'm so glad to see you updating so much lately. ❤

Now I really want to know more about him. Just the way you described how frantic he was trying to hurry through everything and how she seems innocent and really didn't even understand that he would be worried that she wouldn't be there when he got back. Can't wait for the next update, and yea don't stop writing this story, you really have something there and if this is the 3rd revamp you obviously have something here that you want to say and we want to hear it.

@ sempiternal.
I couldn't ever get tired of your comments, evereverever. I think you're my favorite person on this site just because of them. Honestly, (this may be mushy) but your comments helped me push myself to make updates. And I'm also glad that you like this story, but then I'm not because I'm still not sure if this is way I want to continue it. But thank you for all of the feedback you've ever given me i just, I don't even know. I think I'm finally getting over that dry spell or whatever and I'll have many updates your way soon c:

DAMMIT I ALWAYS FIND THESE SUPER BADASS STORIES AND YOU'RE ALWAYS THE WRITER. WHY DO YOU HAVE TO HOG ALL OF THE WRITING TALENT? Seriously, this is so freaking good. You're probably tired of hearing me tell you that. But everything you write... is perfect. The summary to this was wonderful. The first chapter, clearly, left me wanting more. I want to know the backstory of Callum and the narrator so badly. I want to know how she can be so cold and knowingly and seemingly not care to manipulate people the way she obviously manipulated Callum by crying and using the L word. I want to feel that she's extremely cruel and tell myself that I won't like her, but I feel like I'm going to like her anyway. I'm probably, truthfully, just going to feel bad for her and going to confuse that with whether I like her or not. Anyway, most of my pity goes to Callum so far. But I reaaaaalllly need a back story. I want one so bad I can hardly stand it. I'm seriously in love with everything you produce. Please, do not ever, for any reason, stop writing. Don't ever, ever, ever. Ever. EVER. Stop. ❤

I don't even remember what it was like before, I just want to see it unfold. Sometimes you only have a glimpse of what you want it to be

This story is not completely stupid, I really wanna see where this goes