Is He Worth It? - Comments

More please? I'm hoping you're still updating this! A great story so far!

@ MITCHEAE
I wanted to let you know I hadn't forgotten about the story! I've been on vacation. But I am stuck; I want to make this as realistic as possible. I am halfway through the next chapter. I do have a brother that's in the military as well, which led me to include it in this story. I am so sorry to hear your's has been injured; but glad that he is all right. It brings tears to my eyes to even think of that phone call, so I've been really trying to capture that emotion in the chapter. Update will be soon, thanks for your comment :)

I need to know whats happening. This hits home. I have a brother in the army and one in the marine. But I have 3 older brothers and I am from Ohio. Weird right. My family has had a call a little over 3 years ago about one of "my boys" getting injured in ahfganistan. He's good and was very lucky but its a heart stopper

On the first chapter and already love it. Older brothers that are marines for the win

Love them together. Rough phone call to get though. Hope Sid is there for her.

Wow, that's intense. But Reece seems to be handling this like a champ

@ Kaly18
Thanks! I get sick of stories without a little banter. People don't talk emotions all the time, gotta have a litte wit too :)

@ Ladyfiaran
Things are about to get more intense, hope you enjoy :)

Like their bantering

That was such a sweet chapter, Sid and Reece are so cute together

@ Thatmom
Thank you! I feel like the story is progressing really slowly, but I feel it's important to know every detail of their first encounter. It'll move a little faster beyond these first few chapters :)

@ Ladyfiaran
Thank you so much for all your feedback, your comments keep me confident in my writing :)

This story is really cute. I love the character development in your writing.

That was such a romantic, atmospheric chapter. I can totally imagine Sid in a boat, him being from Nova Scotia and all. Loved this chapter!

Wow, I love how awkward and cute they are around each other. Sid and Reese seem to be getting along well

@jess123 I'm having a fan fiction fan girl moment! Your story inspired me to write this. I hoped story entertains you now that yours is done, and please let me know if you have any ideas for improvement on mine! You're one of the greats on this website hah :) and Hawks won game 1, but with the length of the game, I don't think there is a clear advantage for one team, it's going to be a long series.

@errolsam123 I hope they are frequent enough for ya! I'm always thinking of what is going to happen in the chapter and how it will progress which makes it take a little longer, but I hope it's worth it. Thanks for your comment!

@Ladyfiaran your feedback helps me to keep going, glad you like Reese! I like the way she and Sid both struggle with their confidence and I think it helps their chemistry seem more real :)

@whoa.itsjess thanks so much :) big fan of New Girl? Always glad to hear from y'all!

@patti1022 hope you're still enjoying it! Thanks for being the first comment :)