@ AllfortheMusic Not really, I've actually had worse. Once I got a few threats because they really, really did not like the way I took a story. You voicing your opinion though means that we're doing something right.
I hate May. I hate May. I hate May. I hate May. I hate May. Why the hell are you doing this to me! It's torture! I need Jalex, not Maylex. It's just wrong, wrong, wrong, wrong, wrong, wrong. Like WTF! Sorry for my rant, I came for Jalex, not May being a bitch and taking Jalex away. I'm sure May is a good person irl but in this I really hate her. I'm taking this too literally for my own good aren't I?
I hate May. I hate May. I hate May. I hate May. I hate May. Why the hell are you doing this to me! It's torture! I need Jalex, not Maylex. It's just wrong, wrong, wrong, wrong, wrong, wrong. Like WTF! Sorry for my rant, I came for Jalex, not May being a bitch and taking Jalex away. I'm sure May is a good person irl but in this I really hate her. I'm taking this too literally for my own good aren't I?
@ m0riarty Oh my god, I feel like such an idiot. Thank you so much for noticing that. All Jack's are supposed to Alex's. It'll be fixed in about ten hours (I have school and it doesn't let me access mibba)
@ m0riarty I noticed that too. It's really a simple mistake because I do have the habit of doing it all the time (since I sometimes write in 3rd person). I'm sure it'll be fixed soon.
This was a good chapter, but the only bad thing i noticed was that you kept switching POV's without telling us? Like, it was Jack's chapter, but sometimes you would say "Jack went" or "Jack saw" instead of Alex. Just pointing that out
like seriously alex needs to stop