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  • dixonchick

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    so cried
    July 26th, 2013 at 09:57pm
  • dixonchick

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    so cried
    July 26th, 2013 at 09:57pm
  • KillJoySynner

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    Wooo! Amazing!
    July 17th, 2013 at 05:13am
  • The Detective

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    lol she sure does. There will be another plot twist with that, question is, when will she tell Daryl and how will he react?
    July 3rd, 2013 at 05:18am
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    What a twist! She gotta bun in the oven!
    July 3rd, 2013 at 04:27am
  • Rawrliz

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    Woo hoo thirty seconds to mars:)!
    June 26th, 2013 at 10:41am
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    @ RedneckGal12
    Thank You I'm glad you like it so far.
    June 21st, 2013 at 05:55pm
  • RedneckGal12

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    Good story Very Happy
    June 21st, 2013 at 11:15am
  • The Detective

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    Ikr He'll get ALOT closer to her. I'm just brewing with all kinds of plots in my head, I just gotta figure out which ones to use.
    June 15th, 2013 at 01:41am
  • KillJoySynner

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    Woooo!:P I'm hoping Daryl would get closer to her, it'll probably be awkward if both Rick and Glenn find them o.0 but BBC pretty funny:P
    June 15th, 2013 at 01:15am
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    @ KillJoySynner
    Well I'm glad you think that :) I'm glad people actually like this story
    June 14th, 2013 at 10:34pm
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    @ Miakoda
    Whatever you decide would still be awesome to read:)
    June 14th, 2013 at 10:30pm
  • The Detective

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    @ KillJoySynner
    Thank you :) I've already started on the next chapter. I'm wondering if I should bring the governor in early or not. Maybe the motorcycle gang from before. Who knows. I've only got the first paragraph written.
    June 14th, 2013 at 10:24pm
  • KillJoySynner

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    Awesome update:) Daryl most likely raised the sexual tention between the two, really hope nothing bad happens between the two
    June 14th, 2013 at 10:14pm
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    @ Death_to_Roses
    Thank you :) I'm glad you like it, i'd add another chapter but it's stormin so my computer's off and i'm on my phone. Bu anyway there should be another chapter up sometime tomorrow. I'm hoping to add some more drama, i just gotta figure out how.
    June 14th, 2013 at 06:55am
  • Death_to_Roses

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    I like the way you've switched up the events that happen while still keeping somewhat close to the truth. I dunno if Shane is really gonna be killed by Glenn or if he'll get away but he dies anyway (eventually). Nice move!
    June 14th, 2013 at 06:46am
  • The Detective

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    OK, I'm actually writing the fifth chapter, I hope lots of people are going to like it, because there is going to be a lot of sentimental shit going on between Daryl Phoenix and Glenn. I really hope people like this story
    June 14th, 2013 at 05:50am
  • KillJoySynner

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    I like how Glenn reacted and beat Shane's face in. Daryl I think will feel awkward being a shoulder to cry on, but might explode a bit bit most likely regret it after he sees how much he scared her. I shall check that other atory of yours out:)
    June 14th, 2013 at 05:22am
  • The Detective

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    I would tell you what Glenn will do but that would just ruin it! I'm in the process of writing the next chapter. I have another Daryl Dixon fan fic that I'm workin on, I have the first three chapters up, but I'm not sure if I like it as much as I like this one.
    June 14th, 2013 at 02:14am
  • KillJoySynner

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    :0 Shane! Douche! Awesome that Daryl came to the rescue, wonder whay Glenn will do:P
    June 14th, 2013 at 02:11am
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