@ sassygee. Ahhhh, that makes me so beyond happy. I don't think I made this to be based on One Direction, I just felt he seemed like a good character with all the things he has to face as a celebrity. I'm so glad the prologue won you over. Thanks so much!!!
Okay, I am not a fan of One Direction by any means. But oh my god. This is fantastically written. Please continue. I'm subscribing because the prologue is literally perfect. You're so descriptive. It's awesome! You don't see many writers like that anymore. I loved it. Seriously, keep it up.
I am not a one direction, that being said, I adore this story line. I love how you make Harry feel alone and out of place in the beginning. It makes the story that much more original. He's so alone and every has someone else. Update soon.
I am not a one direction, that being said, I adore this story line. I love how you make Harry feel alone and out of place in the beginning. It makes the story that much more original. He's so alone and every has someone else. Update soon.
I am not a one direction, that being said, I adore this story line. I love how you make Harry feel alone and out of place in the beginning. It makes the story that much more original. He's so alone and every has someone else. Update soon.
@ halcyondays In that case I think you met your goal. You get a real sense of how he feels when you read it and I'm also glad that I gave it a chance coz it was really, REALLY great x
@ Weirdo-Freak-Child I'm glad you gave it a chance! And thank you! My goal was to get the reader to be able to understand what he feels in the story, maybe even real life, who knows! :)
Comment Swap :) So I'm not a huge 1D fan but this was great. It's Written really well that I actually believed he fells like that. I didn't notice any grammar errors etc. Your should definitely keep updating, this is great and you're a brill writer. x
Thanks so much! I sent you a message :)