Call Me "Zero" - Comments

  • SachaSamaha

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    It's clearer now! And you're welcome ! ^^
    February 3rd, 2014 at 07:36pm
  • ShotToRemember

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    @ SachaSamaha
    Good question. Gerard telling Frank he loved him triggered something in "Zero's" mind, making Frank remember, but not necessarily return the feelings again. Plus, even if he did return the feelings, they'd only be second in his mind after his "father's" command to kill Gerard. Ya' know, the whole I does as he says deal. He's super programmed to follow his orders. Does that make sense? Ahahha I hope so^.^

    Anyways, thank you for reading, and I'm glad you like it! That really means so much to me:)
    February 2nd, 2014 at 05:19pm
  • SachaSamaha

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    It's such an amazing story! Loooove iit!
    But i have one question: why did he pull the trigger if he remembered ?
    February 2nd, 2014 at 01:38pm
  • SingingInTheOil

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    C RYING
    January 18th, 2014 at 12:30am
  • ShotToRemember

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    @ Princess_Scene1
    Yay that'd be awesome! And I know how it is... With this one finished, I'm still cycling between... five, I think? And a sixth in the works, as soon as I finish a few more. Good God it's toughXD
    January 5th, 2014 at 09:07pm
  • Princess_Scene1

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    @ ShotToRemember
    I'd love to rewrite it. :3 It would be a little bit slower because I am also writing 3 other fanfics, but I'm up for the challenge! :3
    January 5th, 2014 at 08:07pm
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    @ Princess_Scene1
    well thanks for telling me:) and if you're really up to rewriting or adding to the ending id love to read it... of course you don't have to haha I'm just kinda interested
    January 5th, 2014 at 03:16am
  • Princess_Scene1

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    @ ShotToRemember
    It was a beautiful ending but it felt empty, ya know? Like, there should of been more. Maybe then later how Frank does go on with life, and then like, maybe if they ever maybe help Gee. Maybe they could like bring him to life. It's just a suggestion but it's your story, not mine. <3 Confused
    January 4th, 2014 at 06:09pm
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    @ Madzikinz
    I'm sorry!! I'm glad you liked it though! i was worried the emotional aspect (and recently the plot line aspect, eeesh) didn't get through.. thank you so much for reading and commenting, though! so much love, StR
    January 4th, 2014 at 03:42am
  • Madzikinz

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    This is going to replay in my head for the next month I swear
    January 4th, 2014 at 03:41am
  • Madzikinz

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    *violently throws ipod across room
    January 4th, 2014 at 03:40am
  • Madzikinz

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    HOLY FUCKING SHIT THAT ACTUALLY HAPPENED I'M CRYING NOW BUT I WOULDN'T CHANGE ANYTHING help too many feels this story is too good to handle
    January 4th, 2014 at 03:39am
  • ShotToRemember

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    @ Princess_Scene1
    hmm just out of curiosity, what did it feel like?
    January 4th, 2014 at 01:26am
  • Princess_Scene1

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    I feel slow... IT DIDN'T FEEL LIKE IT. <3
    January 4th, 2014 at 01:04am
  • ShotToRemember

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    @ Princess_Scene1
    but frank, well technically zero, killed Gerard at the end, sweetheartXD
    January 4th, 2014 at 12:23am
  • Princess_Scene1

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    @ ShotToRemember
    Maybe see what happens to Gerard after they take Frank, and what happens to Frank and then how they find each other and how they learn to love each other. :3

    I'm so tempted to write the rest of the story. Hahaha! xD But I love the way you wrote it. It's beautiful, but it feels empty. I don't know if it's just me that feels that way or...? But I love the story line <3
    January 4th, 2014 at 12:00am
  • ShotToRemember

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    @ Princess_Scene1
    what do you want to happen??
    January 3rd, 2014 at 06:58pm
  • Princess_Scene1

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    @ ShotToRemember
    BUT I CANNOT END THAT WAYYYYY.... ;_;
    January 3rd, 2014 at 06:44pm
  • ShotToRemember

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    @ Princess_Scene1
    There are no more updates.. That was the last chapter! Thx for reading and commenting though!'
    January 3rd, 2014 at 03:12pm
  • Princess_Scene1

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    GRRRRN UPDATE SOON BC I DEMAND IT! in a nice way.. :3
    January 3rd, 2014 at 07:54am