OhMyGod... I'm seriously crying! It was awesome but... WHY!!!!!! I loved it so much, why! Why didn't you just end it happily?! Ugh!!! Right in the feels..
WHAT. ZERO YOU BASTARD. My heart really hurts. Like my fuck. You are a great writer. <3 but gah. Fucking.. Like.. Gerard ;-; I can't explain my feelings right now so I'm sorry for the jibber jabber.. Thank you for writing <3
I love it when Frank is dominant, but dominant Gerard is great too just Frank being dominant is better. Also your writing is amazing! Can't wait for the last chapter! I'm thinking something big or unexpected is going to happen... But who knows, except you because you're the author of course. :D
Hot damn. That... was gorgeous as all hell!!! Very interesting, very different!!! And then that sex scene, oh MY. Yes, I approve highly. ONE MORE!? Oh :((
Idk what the hell you were talking about because, honestly, the parentheses are brilliant in the chapter. I mean, really?? "(punk? puppy?)" Frank is a punk puppy and no one can convince me otherwise. I also love how adorable he is and even if Frank didn't speak, the swingset conversation was lovely and the imagery=perfection.
Anyway, I really have to point out that I think it's great how you portray Frank; he's terrified and in a weird setting and bein hunted, but he's still a weapon. He's dangerous and we really got to see more of that in this chapter. I'm not gonna lie, dom!Frank usually just isn't my thing (mostly because Iove puppy, sub!Frank so much) but yours was fxcking well done *applauds*
Thank you so much for not killing Frank's Point of View! I love the way you portray the way he thinks. Really love it! Please don't change it dramatically in an instant if you want him to all of a sudden want him to develop feelings for Gerard. Let this story drag out! I'm really loving the pace it's going at.
@ momiji_neyuki Seven, oof! Sounds like a helluva workload!! Thanks btw:
@ tryhonesty Thank you! Yeah, it's really hard not to shove fics aside and try to forget about them, but I try to keep a cycle going to ward off writer's bloc:/
@ baysway Thanks for the honesty about the povs! It'll only be Frank's one more time in the last chapter, so it'll be Gerard for quite awhile longer:) And yes, five chapters, but the last two have a lot happening so I think they're gonna be really long haha
@ ChemicalDaze Thank you so much for reading and commenting!
@ TearsOfGoodbye Yay, I'm so glad! I didn't want it to be too robotic for the sake of reader comfort, but I was worried it wasn't quite robotic enough.. so your comment means a lot! Thanks for reading!
thx so much for reading and commenting! makes me very happy:)