Call Me "Zero" - Comments

  • ShotToRemember

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    I'm glad you liked it.. sorry to make you cry though!
    thx so much for reading and commenting! makes me very happy:)
    January 2nd, 2014 at 11:23pm
  • X_WantedCriminal_X

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    OhMyGod... I'm seriously crying!
    It was awesome but... WHY!!!!!! I loved it so much, why! Why didn't you just end it happily?! Ugh!!! Right in the feels..

    Omg. Ok. I think I'm done rambling.
    January 2nd, 2014 at 08:44pm
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    @ tryhonesty
    yayy I'm glad you liked it! thank you so much for reading and yelling me how you felt about it!
    January 2nd, 2014 at 05:22pm
  • tryhonesty

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    Ugh how could u?0.0 that ugh that was just plain mean:c i'm a sucker for happy endings, but i still really enjoyed reading your fic:)
    January 2nd, 2014 at 03:23pm
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    @ ADaytoPiercetheVeil_
    I'm glad you liked it:) thanks for reading and commenting!!!
    January 2nd, 2014 at 10:55am
  • ADaytoPiercetheVeil_

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    NONONONOONONONONONO JFC THIS STORY IS LIKE MY DRUG
    January 2nd, 2014 at 10:39am
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    @ TYLER.F.T.W.W.W
    thanks for reading! I'm glad you liked itXD
    January 2nd, 2014 at 05:00am
  • TYLER.F.T.W.W.W

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    WHAT. ZERO YOU BASTARD. My heart really hurts. Like my fuck. You are a great writer. <3 but gah. Fucking.. Like.. Gerard ;-; I can't explain my feelings right now so I'm sorry for the jibber jabber.. Thank you for writing <3
    January 2nd, 2014 at 04:51am
  • Luna_Mark

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    Update soon, I really love this story, you're an awesome writer!
    December 31st, 2013 at 09:37am
  • TearsOfGoodbye

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    I love it when Frank is dominant, but dominant Gerard is great too just Frank being dominant is better. Also your writing is amazing! Can't wait for the last chapter! I'm thinking something big or unexpected is going to happen... But who knows, except you because you're the author of course. :D
    December 25th, 2013 at 05:45pm
  • lizzicleromance

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    Hot damn. That... was gorgeous as all hell!!! Very interesting, very different!!! And then that sex scene, oh MY. Yes, I approve highly. ONE MORE!? Oh :((

    Well... I can't wait to read it!!
    December 24th, 2013 at 08:54pm
  • btBatt

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    Idk what the hell you were talking about because, honestly, the parentheses are brilliant in the chapter. I mean, really??
    "(punk? puppy?)"
    Frank is a punk puppy and no one can convince me otherwise. I also love how adorable he is and even if Frank didn't speak, the swingset conversation was lovely and the imagery=perfection.

    Anyway, I really have to point out that I think it's great how you portray Frank; he's terrified and in a weird setting and bein hunted, but he's still a weapon. He's dangerous and we really got to see more of that in this chapter. I'm not gonna lie, dom!Frank usually just isn't my thing (mostly because Iove puppy, sub!Frank so much) but yours was fxcking well done *applauds*
    December 20th, 2013 at 02:44pm
  • momiji_neyuki

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    This was worth the wait. ^-^
    December 19th, 2013 at 05:10pm
  • momiji_neyuki

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    This was worth the wait. ^-^
    December 19th, 2013 at 05:10pm
  • Frankiiestein

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    Thank you so much for not killing Frank's Point of View! I love the way you portray the way he thinks. Really love it! Please don't change it dramatically in an instant if you want him to all of a sudden want him to develop feelings for Gerard. Let this story drag out! I'm really loving the pace it's going at.

    Please update soon! :)
    October 25th, 2013 at 07:09am
  • TearsOfGoodbye

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    @ ShotToRemember
    No problem. C:
    October 24th, 2013 at 03:21am
  • ShotToRemember

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    @ momiji_neyuki
    Seven, oof! Sounds like a helluva workload!! Thanks btw:

    @ tryhonesty
    Thank you! Yeah, it's really hard not to shove fics aside and try to forget about them, but I try to keep a cycle going to ward off writer's bloc:/

    @ baysway
    Thanks for the honesty about the povs! It'll only be Frank's one more time in the last chapter, so it'll be Gerard for quite awhile longer:) And yes, five chapters, but the last two have a lot happening so I think they're gonna be really long haha

    @ ChemicalDaze
    Thank you so much for reading and commenting!

    @ TearsOfGoodbye
    Yay, I'm so glad! I didn't want it to be too robotic for the sake of reader comfort, but I was worried it wasn't quite robotic enough.. so your comment means a lot! Thanks for reading!
    October 24th, 2013 at 03:18am
  • TearsOfGoodbye

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    Ah! :o I want to know what happens next and I love the way you wrote Franks POV. In my head it sounded like a robots mind. :D
    October 24th, 2013 at 12:02am
  • TearsOfGoodbye

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    Ah! :o I want to know what happens next and I love the way you wrote Franks POV. In my head it sounded like a robots mind. :D
    October 24th, 2013 at 12:02am
  • TearsOfGoodbye

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    Ah! :o I want to know what happens next and I love the way you wrote Franks POV. In my head it sounded like a robots mind. :D
    October 24th, 2013 at 12:02am