June 16th, 2013 at 06:38am
That's really sad... I hope things gets better for him.
I'll put names when I switched the POVs. Thanks for letting me know what you think
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@ All You Need Is Ice_
That's really sad... I hope things gets better for him.
I'll put names when I switched the POVs. Thanks for letting me know what you think June 16th, 2013 at 06:36am -
Hey! I really like this story so far. My heart aches for Carlin. I know someone who's struggling with a bunch of things, and also being homeless and he can't even get in a shelter. :(
One quick question, when it switches POV for the first time, I was a little confused. At first I thought it was Freddy talking but then all of a sudden it says, 'Freddy gave me a pointed look.' And yeah, I just wasn't sure and it kinda threw me off.June 16th, 2013 at 06:25am -
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really like the start of this, hope you can regularly update ;)June 15th, 2013 at 04:28am
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perfect length and a great start! update soon!June 14th, 2013 at 12:46pm
@ tmicks100
Thank you! I will try to update soon