March 6th, 2015 at 11:33pm
Hiiiii!!!!
So I've never read an Outsiders fic before and I'm not,entirely sure what it is or what it's about, but I got this from comment swap so I'm gonna try to leave something constructive for you (:
Okay, umm, I think this has a lot of potential to go somewhere AMAZING and you're really onto something.
However, I also think that in order to accomplish that, you should consider looking into a beta and maybe look through Tumblr for some advice and tips to do what you're trying to do.
Also, please feel free to check through my blog. It's a writing blog! You can look under http://www.chasingafterinfinity.tumblr.com/tagged/writing+help for various activites that'll help you further develop Charlotte as a character and provide tips to hellp with your plotline ((:
Best of luck and I hope you have a great day! (:
So I've never read an Outsiders fic before and I'm not,entirely sure what it is or what it's about, but I got this from comment swap so I'm gonna try to leave something constructive for you (:
Okay, umm, I think this has a lot of potential to go somewhere AMAZING and you're really onto something.
However, I also think that in order to accomplish that, you should consider looking into a beta and maybe look through Tumblr for some advice and tips to do what you're trying to do.
Also, please feel free to check through my blog. It's a writing blog! You can look under http://www.chasingafterinfinity.tumblr.com/tagged/writing+help for various activites that'll help you further develop Charlotte as a character and provide tips to hellp with your plotline ((:
Best of luck and I hope you have a great day! (: