The House Next Door. - Comments

This chapter is so playful, but you can also sense the tension. Oh my. I am loving this!

LOVE IT! As always! Getting somewhere now,hm? ;) haha

@ KaptianDope
Hahahahah ❤ I'm gonna try

-chants- update! Update! Update! Update! Please!!!

@ Hannah1007700
I am so amazed that you compared it to Londyn and Bane cause that's what I was aiming for. Oh my hahahahahahah. I was sneaky about that.

Marcy's news is so so huge. And you'll get to see more of the conversation. I loved writing this chapter.

Thanks girl❤☺

❤- Veronica

My favorite chapter!!! <3 In the beginning when they begin to jog I love the teasing between Mr Hardy and Addy! When I read this
"May I ask you something?" Addison wondered.
"You may ask" Mr Hardy glanced at Addison.
It just reminded me a lot of Londyn and Bane from "Fear"! So cute <3
Mr Hardy played for the Minor Leagues?? That's awesome, but so sad that his calf muscle tore making it unable for him to play! :( When Mr Hardy blew on her cut omg I could just see his lips so beautiful. "Sorry about the bandaid" It had a Batman logo, that was freaking hilarious to me! >.<
I just love their connection already, especially during the car ride <3
"I hope you realize I don't mind giving you rides to and from school" Mr Hardy said slowly. "So don't be all shy in asking" I take it there will be more car rides together? ;) HE WAS MISTAKEN FOR HER BOYFRIEND OH MY LORD I'M DONE that's awesome for her, inside she loved him being mistaken xD And then there's Marcy, her news is still big too because that's what she wanted, but Addy's news, I'm suprised Marcy didn't jump up and down! Hahaha (:
This was a really funny and enjoyable chapter <3
Can't wait for the next xx

-Hannah!(:

My favorite chapter!!! <3 In the beginning when they begin to jog I love the teasing between Mr Hardy and Addy! When I read this
"May I ask you something?" Addison wondered.
"You may ask" Mr Hardy glanced at Addison.
It just reminded me a lot of Londyn and Bane from "Fear"! So cute <3
Mr Hardy played for the Minor Leagues?? That's awesome, but so sad that his calf muscle tore making it unable for him to play! :( When Mr Hardy blew on her cut omg I could just see his lips so beautiful. "Sorry about the bandaid" It had a Batman logo, that was freaking hilarious to me! >.<
I just love their connection already, especially during the car ride <3
"I hope you realize I don't mind giving you rides to and from school" Mr Hardy said slowly. "So don't be all shy in asking" I take it there will be more car rides together? ;) HE WAS MISTAKEN FOR HER BOYFRIEND OH MY LORD I'M DONE that's awesome for her, inside she loved him being mistaken xD And then there's Marcy, her news is still big too because that's what she wanted, but Addy's news, I'm suprised Marcy didn't jump up and down! Hahaha (:
This was a really funny and enjoyable chapter <3
Can't wait for the next xx

-Hannah!(:

My favorite chapter!!! <3 In the beginning when they begin to jog I love the teasing between Mr Hardy and Addy! When I read this
"May I ask you something?" Addison wondered.
"You may ask" Mr Hardy glanced at Addison.
It just reminded me a lot of Londyn and Bane from "Fear"! So cute <3
Mr Hardy played for the Minor Leagues?? That's awesome, but so sad that his calf muscle tore making it unable for him to play! :( When Mr Hardy blew on her cut omg I could just see his lips so beautiful. "Sorry about the bandaid" It had a Batman logo, that was freaking hilarious to me! >.<
I just love their connection already, especially during the car ride <3
"I hope you realize I don't mind giving you rides to and from school" Mr Hardy said slowly. "So don't be all shy in asking" I take it there will be more car rides together? ;) HE WAS MISTAKEN FOR HER BOYFRIEND OH MY LORD I'M DONE that's awesome for her, inside she loved him being mistaken xD And then there's Marcy, her news is still big too because that's what she wanted, but Addy's news, I'm suprised Marcy didn't jump up and down! Hahaha (:
This was a really funny and enjoyable chapter <3
Can't wait for the next xx

-Hannah!(:

@ KaptianDope
The wait will be over soon ☺

@ elysamarie
Aaaahhh girl ❤☺ you're amazing thanks ❤

Loving this more and more with every update, my dear!!

Grrr I can't wait for more!

@ Ashley8726@ brndig0r3

I'm sorry it's torturous and is slowly killing you.
But..

It will be worth it ! ☺❤

Ugh! Youre killing me! haha I love it thought!

Slow and torturous... I love it!

@ inheavymetal
You did wha? Oh my god that's the sweetest thing. Thank you for thinking that ☺❤

Ah girl❤ I'm hooked too. I'll try

@ KaptianDope
Looses control? Sigh I wish it could be that easy. But it'll be worth it hehehe

i made an account just to say how much i love your writing! please update soon i'm hooked lol

Oh my. This is getting too good. I just hope soon Mr.Hardy looses control and just kisses her already hahaha

@ KaptianDope
☺ Thank you this means so much to me that everyone is enjoying reading the story. I plan on updating soon. ❤