You and your damn cliffhangers! Haha, great chapter. I really hope Dave pulls his head out of his ass soon, because I don't think El could handle much more of this. Update soon, girlie! :)
I like the cliffhanger, I'm really thinking that he's going to try to hide his reaction but at the same time he's going to freak out and do something totally out of character. i love this chapter!
Wow... I just read this whole story, and I really do think it's great! I don't read fanfictions like this normally, but I loved this one! It was so easy to read, the style was perfect the emotion and description was out of this world... gahh I wish I could write as well as you <3