As soon as I read the name Brian Haner in your summary, I looked up the video and I'm glad I did because it was hilarious. And I think it fits well with Daryl. It was great!
This is seriously the most awesome hilarious story I've ever read. It's only fitting that Daryl would have a bad tempered wife who could kick his ass. LOVED IT!!! I wish you would expand on this. I love your writing!
*Comment Swap* First off, I love your writing style, and how you use the slang and accent in your writing!! It made me even more drawn into the story! The layout is good, however the font is a little small for my liking! My advice would to make it bigger!! The plot is solid and it's great!
Wow... just wow... I have no words for this one shot. Casey is pure evil and if I was Daryl, I would have thrown her butt across the cafe, but I loved it. Good work! =3
Well that was cool haha but I would definitely not stay with someone who cheated on me :/ to me that's the worst thing someone who supposedly loves you would do