Black Diamonds - Comments

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This story is fantastic. In the first chapter, you pulled me in immediately with your description of Jackson as he was such a mysterious character. I think you develop and describe characters very well! I really like Lacey and I love how the story is told from her perspective. Occasionally, the story is hard to follow, as the paragraphs are a little big and wordy, but otherwise than that, this is a good story. :) Good job!

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First off, I love the poem/song lyrics in the beginning. Not sure which but I like it! The layout is nice, and it's easy to read. I think you started the romance between the two a little fast, but you have great writing skills!

I think this story is really good! I loved in the second chapter when Jackson called her and was just being all adorable. I think Nick iis a really funny character, too, so it was funny to see him popping occasionally. The only thing I didn't like about this story was that there were a lot of minor characters. Like a lot. Especially in the second chapter, it was hard to keep up with everyone and what they were saying, doing, etc. Other than that, I loved this story!

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Firstly both the title and layout are great, They really made me want to read this story! I like how you started off, it grabbed my attention, which is not easy to do! I think you've written this piece well and I really do like your style or writing, I wish you luck with the rest of this.

this story is really well written and i love it so far!! please continue to update, it's an amazing story! x

I liked this story. I'm here from comment swap. I think you have a great talent. Well done. Your writing style is really unique and the plot you created was great. You should continue to update because it's really good c:

Very good.