i usually hate OC's in stories,but this was amazing,and i actually learned something after reading this.Your an amazing writer and i cant wait to read your other stories :)
such an amazing story, you did a very good job on it! i hate to see it ending. especially since it's the first Max/ETF story i have read. and tbh, i didn't think i'd like it too well. but you changed my mind about that, for sure! can't wait to read more of your stories, don't disappear! until next time! c;
I can't even begin to describe how I feel about this chapter... so many many words come to mind.... I'm terribly upset this is ending.... I adore that max proposed... Just wow! I can't wait to read more of your work dear. It's absolutely awemazing!!!!!!
I can't even begin to describe how I feel about this chapter... so many many words come to mind.... I'm terribly upset this is ending.... I adore that max proposed... Just wow! I can't wait to read more of your work dear. It's absolutely awemazing!!!!!!
First of all ¡¡¡¡¡HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!!! Secondly, Damn!!!!!!! Everything just went KABOOM! Craig is a douchebag, Monte is being a complete prick! *smacks him upside the head* Max ... What the hell? She loves you yet you hurt her? Though you did redeem yourself there.... Thank you Robert, Micheal, and Ronnie! I'm loving this story even still but, I might have to mental beat the three imbeciles.... Great updates dear!
HOLY SHIT THAT WAS THE BIGGEST FUCKING TWIST I'VE EVER SEEN FUCK KAYLA BUT ROXIE COULD HAVE FUCKING DECKED HER AND RAN AND YES MY HEART BROKE AND IS STILL CURRENTLY BREAKING BECAUSE OF YOU IS IT MAX AT THE DOOR OR CRAIG OR RONNIE OR SOMETHING JESUS CHRIST UPDATE SOON (p.s. i only wrote in all caps because it was that exciting and i was literally rolling around in my bed practically sobbing. thanks, you.)
Ronnie's stirring up some trouble, as always.. amazing chapter, and a very steamy sex scene! haha. and i'm so proud of Max! he's been doing so well. i love that he's bettering himself. (': update soon!