Lips of an Angel - Comments

Please update

I was rereading this and it would be a pleasure if you continued it. The story line has me hooked and your writing is great.

i'm so glad my comment made you update! I'm in love with this story ahhhh

oh my god poor jack
:( i kinda really hope alex catches jack and oli ya know
love love this ~~

yay you updated!
thank god alex heard that, i hope he starts piecing things together

@ all-time-perfect
Thanks to this comment I finally came around and wrote the next chapter! So it's all thanks to you, but I finally updated!

oh my god i'm begging you you have to update this

please update plEASE

SO GLAD THIS IS CHAPTERED NOW.
aw poor jack no.

Awee poor jack:( im so glad u made this chaptered!

You should do song fics because those are amazing but PLEEEEEEAAAASEEEEE write a sequel to this. Make it a chaptered fic if you want but I want to know what happens It's too good to just drop right there

You should do song fics because those are amazing but PLEEEEEEAAAASEEEEE write a sequel to this. Make it a chaptered fic if you want but I want to know what happens It's too good to just drop right there

please continue this its so good.. even if theres just a sequel you cant just leave us hanging lol

Oh I like this a lot.

aw I'm stoked for this one

i would love if you continued this bc you can't just leave this here, it's killing me. seriously, this was amazing and i've never read anything like it. and i lOve song fics so yes please continue

this was really good.. :) You shoulld make this a chaptered story.

you cna't just leave jack like that????

i think you should make this into a chaptered story! it'd be fantastic!

IM CRYING

this was v good omFG and yeah you should do a whole bunch of one shots but its up to you to make them related but it'd be pretty fun to read if they were some-what related :))))