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Goddammit my heart

AND NOW JACK IS DIEING SO IM SOBBING EVEN HARDER

AND NOW JACK IS DIEING SO IM SOBBING EVEN HARDER

um wow i was reading the part where alex died while the acoustic version of somewhere in neverland was playing, and i have to say i usually dont cry from stories (I mean when they dont go into heart wrenching detail about the loss-like the begging of coming back and please dont go stuff) but hearing his voice coming through my speakers and thinking about the meaning of the song, well im sobbing now.

@ whiskey_princess
N'aww your comment has just made my day! Thank you! <3

Yet again you amaze me with your writing!!! Emotional roller coaster and had me sobbing on the bus.. I got some right weird looks :') amazing.

Sobs into pillow.

I'm in tears right now!!! This was so sad :( beautiful but just so sad!!!!

First of all, I am SO glad that you've used the Alex and Jack layout that you made for 'Growing Up' as it's so freakin' adorable and I LOVE the blue background; it really works well as a layout colour!

Right from the first paragraph, you have managed to grab my attention as a reader; excellent work there with the description! It makes you curious yet calm at the same time as you wonder what Jack means by the less frequent visits to the lake.

It was almost as if the older boy was sitting right beside him, if Jack concentrated hard enough, he could almost feel Alex’s hand over his or his head resting against his shoulder. - Cue the tears, just cue them. Come on, hit me with all of the emotions that you have, I dare you!...Why make a girl cry so soon into the fic? *sobs*

Jack had been the tall, thin, awkward, shy guy with ridiculous hair and a nose that was too large for his face. - Okay, even though I know the mood of this fic isn't going to exactly be light, I can't help but laugh at this sentence, it's perfect and absolutely accurate beyond anything else XD!

Mmmm, Alex as a Quarterback...I can so totally picture that and the photo shoot that they all did with Kerrang! wearing the Jersey's is most definitely not helping...God, now I can't stop picturing him in it...fuck, no wait we need Jack in here for Alex to do that to :P!

Fireman Alex...I'm going to need some serious help after I've finished reading this fic! YOU'RE GIVING ME TOO MANY DAMN IMAGES OF SEXY ALEX IN UNIFORMS! (Can we please get Adam to make that as a portrait shoot? As he is looking for people to photograph to build his portrait skills up!)

The last thing he expected was for a relationship to start but that morning, in a diner in the city, the seeds of their relationship were sown... - I REALLY love this line! It's so cute and you can just picture the two of them gazing across the table to one another with little cheeky smiles on their faces :3

...You’d planned a romantic picnic, full of our favourite food and that night, as we lay on the roof, gazing at the stars, you told me that I was worth the effort. Damn, I still get butterflies just thinking back to you saying those words!” - *sobs even harder* god dammit, Gaskarth you romantic, sexy-haired prince! You're so precious and that's so freakin' adorable and perfect and just 'awww'!

Now, they all sat together in a box in his closet, a treasure chest of memories for Jack. Sometimes looking through the notes, cards, letters and photographs comforted Jack and other times, it was a painful experience for him as too many memories were brought to the surface all at once, - How am I still reading this without crying my heart out! The tears are here, don't get me wrong, but oh my Barakat, I can feel my heart breaking into two...just this part of the paragraph, after saying that Alex was all romantic and all Jack has left of those times is the box and his memories...I can't...nope, I'm done...ALEX!

*Cries even harder* no, Alex, no...you can't be dead! John, bring him back, please?! If this is a sick joke, then make it right!...I seriously lost it when I came to this part - Jack got there just in time to hear them turn the monitors off and the Doctor on Call announcing time of death. Jack’s knees gave way as he collapsed onto Blake. - my heart has been shattered!

I’ve got a tumour, Lexie, it’s on my brain and it’s inoperable. They can’t do anything for me; it’s in an unreachable part of my brain. - Scratch that, THIS is the part I lost it at...oh, to hell with it, I've been sobbing all the way through this! I can't help but notice that this is similar to the Dr. Green storyline in ER too...hmm, I think that's where you got it from XD!

...How could you write this without bawling all the way through it?! Holy...this is the most powerful thing that I have EVER read! Seriously, from start to finish, I had tears in my eyes but when it got to the part where Jack broke up with Matt and had Matt tell him that he loved him as his last words to him...I'm sorry but I can't...I totally lost it and had to take five minutes wiping the tears away before finishing this comment.

You have an absolute talent for writing, seriously you could actually get this published! Your words are effortless, descriptive and so very powerful! I bow down to you for this masterpiece of a fic!

*Hands you the box of tissues* how about we read it again and cry together? Seriously Dibs, you did an absolutely FANTASTIC job on this, and I can only envy you for your talent!

<3 xx