Aww. This was really sweet. It made me think about my best friend, and how she'd react in the situation. I loved how descriptive it was. It really gave me a feel on what exactly Brittany was feeling at that moment.
Wow. This was very well-written. There was a lot of good descriptions. I especially liked the part at the beggining where you described how she was feeling inside. :D
Very good piece of writing. I loved it.