Birthday Surprise - Comments

HOLY SHIT BALLS!!! A FLIPPING THREESOME, WHEW!
Well, it looks like I've got my morning lady boner thanks to you lol. I have to say, Johnny and Zacky is a very odd pair but I still like it and it was still hot. Mmm, when they kissed each other, it really had me going. Didn't expect that, did you Kaisy? lol. I want to have a threesome with Brian and Matt for my birthday lol. I loved the layout, it was very pretty. I'm glad that her boyfriend got to come back for her birthday and spend time with her but with a twist. Shame on you Johnny, for blabbing to Zacky about her fantasies, then again, I'm glad he did because that was some hot sexy time I just read. Overall, this was very good for your first threesome so kuddos to you :D

OH MY GOD IT'S A THREESOME STORY!
You put Zacky in there, holy heck woman, how do you know all of my weaknesses!

Awwww that bit with Johnny was so sweet- the gnome can be so adorable when he wants to be! I just wanna snuggle him until he can't breathe. In a good way of course.

OH MY GOD THAT WAS SO HOT. Like seriously...holy crap, I wanna be right in the middle of that Johnny/Zacky sandwich, like right now. AND THAT LAST LINE! Holy shit, birthday spanking sounds incredible.

Honey, don't doubt yourself- you wrote an absolutely incredible two-shot! Also, I'd like to read more- I wanna read about those birthday spankings! You did an amazing job, thank you for entering my contest!

Damn! Hot threesome was hot! Especially when the boys kissed each other

HEY! You used my name and I pictured it to be me with Matt :P!! I can't help it every time I see my name.

Now that was hot and this was the first time I read a threesome with Zacky and Johnny!! I loved it!!

damn, that was hot. i like how johnny & zacky were used instead of the usual run of the mill syn & shads. dont get me wrong i love them too but i also love me some johnny & zacky. ;)
love the story.