Shadow of a Doubt - Comments

@ matches in water;
Awww!

same here, I just can't fuck around as well as you. & you're welcome c:

@ matches in water;
I do it bc I love fucking around with people's heads. Thankyou!

.. I'm in shock. y u do dis to women? water u doin? this was perfect though, her dignity being taken away so abruptly.

@ RachTheBat_
Thankyou, love! :) I have the most fucked up mind and this is another one of those stories that I love reading and watching, hehe.

This was really dark and twisted and brilliant! I just love the way you describe Brian and his little fetish. Really good! I'm also glad you chose for him to take a normal girl too, normally you read the big bad sexy guy kidnaps an equally sexy girl and they fall in love yada yada. You wrote the rape scene so well! I agree with the others, rape isn't romantic. Awesome job m'dear! :)

@ purple89
Thanks sweetie! :)

This was really really good! I love the constant darkness surrounding the female character. Syn's character is so devious and twisted but i love how he chose to "take" a girl that was normal. Not a bombshell with big boobs. It made it more believable that he would choose her. I have to agree with ZV; i like how you didn't romanticize the rape because there aint nothing romantic about it. Great job again babe.

@ Zacky Vengeance;
Thank you so much, lovely! This means a lot to me! XD

I like the Jack The Ripper effect that Brian has as a murderer. It's cliche, but for this one, it works well. Your description is getting really good- painting a word picture of the scene around you and pulling the reader into the story.
I think you executed the rape scene really well. A lot of people romanticize rape scenes, which you can't because there is nothing fucking romantic about rape. But you've made it extremely realistic and that is awesome. That was really creepy how he found her just after she'd run; that would have been her escape if she hadn't been so slow! But I loved it- you've done an amazing job with this one hun!