Breaking Suburbia - Comments

I keep finding that I can relate to Maggie in weird ways that I never would have thought of.
You've created such a wonderful character with her. Every time I feel I understand her whole character and everything she's going to do, I realize I don't.
It's wonderful and it keeps me reading.
Great work(:

It's been about time, I feel so bad for her!

@ IOwnYouBiatch
Yes, I am too. Hopefully this next chapter is a relief. She stresses me out sometimes :P

Maggy is so....I can't find a word for it! But Im so worried about her, no one deserves so much tension on their own head.

@ Voyage.
Thank you so very much for the in-depth review and the compliments. I'm aiming to write some tonight. Just.... Thank you so much! I needed something to get me excited about this story again :)

I wish every story/book was written as beautifully as this.
I love how it's plot less and how it's in the real world while being in its own world at the same time.
Wow. I can't even express how much I enjoy this. Your narrative is magnetic, it draws me in. It has such an easy flow but the writing is complex and just wow wow wow. You have talent.

Maggie is so interesting! I can't wait to see how her and a Chester act around each other again, thanks for the update. (:

Wonderful!! I can't wait to read more.

This is one of the most well written stories that I have read on this site. You have a real talent. Can't wait to read more!

@ mrsbellaray
Why thank you :). I love this story to death and I just haven't been able to write it recently. I'm going to try to get in a fairly decent update before I leave for vacation. Thank you so much! I really needed this.

I'm still trying to figure this whole story out! In most times I would've given up reading but something keeps me reading and I really like it! Great job!

Comment swap :)
Obviously, the first thing I notice when I open a story is the layout, and yours is so beautiful! After I started reading I thought the whole tone and theme of it fit together really well. It also intrigued me because sometimes I find myself feeling extremely anti-social and I don't mind spending time alone, so I could really relate to the character. I also love the dialogue! It sounds so natural and realistic, which can be difficult for some writers to pull off. This seems to have a simple but intriguing plot and that's really refreshing in itself. So far, you've done a great job! :)

Awesome. She is quite a character...can't wait for more.

@ IOwnYouBiatch
Thank you. I was beginning to think that bots were only subscribed to my story . Most definitely going to update sometime today.

This story fascinates me, shes so sad....I wanna read more. Cant wait for more. (: