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  • SerenitySpeaker

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    @ Renavelia
    Yes is the Dark Knight Bane. I have a story on here for him as well. You should check it out!
    September 4th, 2013 at 05:42pm
  • PuckConnolly

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    I love it! Again, I thought it was really cool how you tied in your other story, and I am interested in seeing what happens next. I have a feeling the shit is going to hit the fan in New York. There's no way no one is going to recognize him.
    September 4th, 2013 at 09:07am
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    I started reading and came upon a page breaker. It had me thinking that the chapter was over, but then I looked at my scroll. This was a long ass chapter! I was like; damn. Rofl! I can't believe I read all of it so quickly. It was amazing. Was the Bane in this chapter, the Bane I am thinking about? You know...the Dark Knight Bane? Of course you know....I mean...if it is him. Haha. Oh well, either way this chapter was awesome. Can't wait until the next one :)
    September 4th, 2013 at 06:09am
  • Johnny Ringo

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    Did I just read through all of this in one sitting? yes and I regret nothing.

    This story is so perfect I can't even explain. I was squealing throughout the whole thing. My favorite part thus far: “You aren't crazy, are you?” she asked, glancing at him. He gave her a genuine broad smile. “Not today.” I fell in love at that part.

    Please please please update again soon In Love Mr. Green
    August 25th, 2013 at 07:37am
  • SufferingSweetSorrow

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    ehehe they finally are together! what will her dad say?!
    August 20th, 2013 at 03:01am
  • SerenitySpeaker

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    @ SpencerG
    Thanks Spence. Means a lot. More persuasion to come OMGYES
    August 20th, 2013 at 02:44am
  • SpencerG

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    Holy fuck that was hot!!!!!!!! And I love when Loki wants to be persauded. But what is her dad doing there?!?!
    And I'm sorry for your loss darling.
    August 19th, 2013 at 07:02pm
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    @ PuckConnolly
    Thank you
    August 19th, 2013 at 05:29pm
  • voguebaby

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    I never want this story to end!
    August 19th, 2013 at 12:17pm
  • imonlysleeping

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    I absolutely love this story! Update soon :)
    August 19th, 2013 at 11:55am
  • TravelerSoul

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    Dad knocking on the door, just after sex... Classic. Works perfectly and I bet the next chapter is going to be really interesting.
    August 19th, 2013 at 08:54am
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    Ahaha! Her dad came for a visit! So funny yet I feel for her and Loki. I hope her dad doesn't question him too much. Rofl!

    Oh! So a few days in Asgard equals to ten years on Earth. Dang, what does Jane look like then? Thor needs to seriously bring Jane to live with him or something.
    August 19th, 2013 at 07:31am
  • PuckConnolly

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    I'm a puddle on the floor right now. That was so perfect. And I loved the twist at the end! I hope all is well with you and I am sorry for your loss.
    August 19th, 2013 at 05:30am
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    Yes! I loved this chapter. It was such a great read. I liked the soft fluff towards the end and the kiss was bliss.
    August 14th, 2013 at 01:39am
  • Rawrliz

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    I love it:)
    August 13th, 2013 at 02:36am
  • SpencerG

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    Too precious!!
    August 12th, 2013 at 04:23pm
  • PuckConnolly

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    I love this so much. Loki and Aurora are so cute together. I am looking forward to seeing what you do with their relationship in later chapters. Very Happy
    August 12th, 2013 at 09:29am
  • Sailor Amethyst

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    Aw cuddly fluff. (#^.^#)
    August 12th, 2013 at 06:19am
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    They cuddled! ❤
    Thanks for the update! Xx
    August 12th, 2013 at 06:11am
  • PuckConnolly

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    I just read this all the way through in one sitting. And I absolutely adore it. I love that you are taking your time with the character development instead of them going at it like bunnies in chapter 3 like a lot of people end up doing. It really makes it all the more sweet. I have subscribed and I wait (albeit impatiently) for your next update.
    August 7th, 2013 at 06:00am