Closer - Comments

God. Crazy beautiful.

I...I...don't even know what to say. I have read all your stories but am finally commenting on this one to finalize that I am in adoration of your work.

You do such a fine job. Do you put much thought into your writing or does it just come?

oh love, you are beautiful.
thank you so so so so so much.
I mean it. You keep this passion alive.

Your writing is like a painting. I mean, you'd have to read it over, and over again just to grasp all the meaning and the concept.
Each and every one of your stories leave me flabbergasted and thinking like crazy. Seriously, I've never seen words any more beautiful. Words have actually have a story, and leave me breathless craving for more. You have to be one of my favorite authors published, or not.
When I see you, I see a famous author.
Don't let me down, 'cause I plan on buying each and every book you write. I just..see this canvas painting in my mind from each little detail you fleet off. You're my hero, Jess. I wish I can write as half as good as you one day. You just, have no much fucking talent, you have no idea.
I have to print this and show all my friends, you know why?
Because its written with eloquence and subtlety that kills.
I'll also feel pride from knowing you. :con:
The passion in this is fantastic. :arms:

Oh my god this is beautiful! I was spellbound, amazing work. I have never read anything like this.

this is an amazing story.
i'm sucked in and suddenly depressed
that it doesn't go further.

you write beautifully.

JESS

I wrote out this really long review for you but Mibba suddenly logged into another site in the process and I lost it. I was becoming proud of it too! I can't find the energy to redo it... the magic was writing it the first time. I'm so sorry.

Anyway, what it said is that you have the Jess touch... with beautiful words that cascade into pure, relateable emotion.

I think this is my favorite piece yet [just printed it out] because it's eerily like my own, shall we say, 'love story.' A girl who thinks too much and a boy who doesn't think at all... in a much more glorious and golden world.

I really love it. I'm sorry I can't remake that review.

You'll go so far, Jess. So very far with your living words. :hug:

Wow. That was amazingly good. I really really really liked it. I claim this page in the name of Love!