So I read the whole thing in three hours. Wow. I feel so accomplished. x]
At the beginning I was like, "Shit. I don't want to hate Brendon. I'm marrying him!"
Ahaha JonnySPIDER was there and said, "Pshhhhh. Anna's marrying that fool, watch."
But I didn't watch. I read. ;]
Oh my god. Sorry for this dumb comment. All I wanted to say was I like your story and I want more! But NO! It just has to be 3 in the morning and this is my dreamtalk.