*comment swap* hi there! So I quite like this. I'm a little confused as to why it's labelled gay smut when Karl seems to be obsessed with ladies more than men but I presume there's more to come? One big thing I noticed was you use names repeatedly instead of he or she. It can be very distracting. Overall I like this and I encourage you to write more (:
October 10th, 2013 at 07:38pm