India - Comments

This story... wow.
I just stumbled across it, and so I chose to start reading... this is one of the best stories I've read in a while.
India's life and backstory is so purely written, so I take it you either experienced what she went through yourself or did a lot of research on it. It's so authentic and it's so rare that an author can get that down perfectly.
Then the love story with Alex, just... it melts my heart. <3 It's so sweet.
Only true critique I have is that some of the time gaps didn't measure up... you went from saying some parties were the last weekend, to a few weeks ago... to some coming up that seemed to take forever to finally happen even though they were only so far away... so those events just got a bit confusing to keep track of timeline wise. I'll also note that you use the spelling "too" a lot, when it more often should be "to" instead. I noticed that was a frequent thing you did.
But those two things can seriously be dismissed with how amazingly written this story is. I'm really bummed that you never continued it or finished it up.
Even though it's been two years, I have faith you could come back to it. I'll be here to read if you do. I wanted to leave this comment letting you know you would still have a reader, and also, to just let you know how much I love your story. You're a really great writer, and I hope at the very least, you're still writing on your own time. Hope you haven't given up on it.
But yeah, as I said, if you ever choose to continue this, I will be here to read and give feedback. Hoping my comment inspires you to do so. :) Great job with this story. <3

I can't believe you're back with this story! This is probably my favorite thing out of anything I've ever read on Mibba, and I thought you were never going to finish! You're so great at writing, I'm so excited to read more. Take as long as you need on the chapters and whatever sequel is happening, it'll be awesome no matter how long it takes.

YAY YOURE BACK!! I can't wait for more! I'm so excited for the sequel! Post toon please!!!

Sooooo glad that you updated this! I love it and can't wait for more <3

you updated!! i love this so much x

One of my fave stories, pls update soon x

Loving this so far <3

I'm so glad this story is back; it's my absolute favourite! Lovely, as always ~ c:

I'm sorry about your relationship ending sweetie. You'll be okay though. :3

I like this chapter. Sorry about your relationship, though. Feelings suck sometimes. :/

I absolutely love this story !!!! I'm just in love with the characters and their relationship !! xx

I'm so so so happy that this updated omg!! And a sequel?! I'm thrilled ahh thank you for updating this story is one of my absolute faves!

@ yeahitsgrace
YAY OMG

@ beautifulecho
thank you so much this is so sweet

I was thinking about how much I missed this story last night and I was worried about you and then I woke up to see that you updated and I was really surprised and this is the best thing.

@ AllTimeJ0rdan
HI I UPDATED

@ itsalsoallineed
i updated oops

Please update omg

PLEASE UPDATE I MISS THIS STORY

JUST READ LIKE ALL OF THIS IN A DAY AND OH MY GOS THIS IS AMAZING PLEASE PLEAS UPDATE THIS I SUCH A CLIFFHANGER OT MY GOD PLEASE

PLEASE UPDATE OH LORD YOURE KILLING ME CHILD
(i obviously love this story way too much)