My Home Is The Ocean - Comments

Why Mike?!!?

Mikey... Why are you so mean? :( Poor Vic

I'm really excited to see how this story will progress. I really enjoyed this intro chapter or whatever you wanna call it haha :)

Um, I just wanted to point out that in the last sentence you switched from using "I" and "me" to "he" and "him". Other than that it's a really great start, I'm looking forwards to reading more.