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  • Crystalg15

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    Why Mike?!!?
    July 11th, 2013 at 05:38am
  • lostinparadise7

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    Mikey... Why are you so mean? :( Poor Vic
    July 10th, 2013 at 07:06pm
  • lostinparadise7

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    I'm really excited to see how this story will progress. I really enjoyed this intro chapter or whatever you wanna call it haha :)
    June 21st, 2013 at 05:56am
  • kittymcmeowmeow

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    Um, I just wanted to point out that in the last sentence you switched from using "I" and "me" to "he" and "him". Other than that it's a really great start, I'm looking forwards to reading more.
    June 21st, 2013 at 04:05am
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