Defiance - Comments

wow okay Oli is definitely sad
it's like there's some void in his life ((maybe a girl can fill it???))
Thomas is adorable hahaha aw ((((:
i'm looking forward to future updates!

I love this story even more after its absence. I had forgotten how amazing it is and how unique a concept it is and I missed it dearly. I am so excited that you're back and you have so much prewritten - that's amazing!
Thomas is so sad, I just want to hug him.
I agree with Oli, though. I would want to know. I'd want my memories back, too. So sad.
I can't wait to read the next chapter!

oh man, i'm so in love with how sad Oli is :((((
i mean, maybe he isn't sad, but he seems to be
i'm just so in love with this story ugh

OH MY GOSH THIS IS THE ABSOLUTE BEST THING EVER. PLEASE POST MORE OR I MAY DIE LIKE OLI AND THOMAS.

I want to hold Oli. Poor chap. But Thomas is great - I already love him and I want to hold him, too. That poor man. I like that Oli has him as a mentor - someone that went through the process to get his memories back and his regretting it. I think that is so beyond fascinating. Because, really, it's true. Why would you want to remember something if you can never have it back? That just makes missing your life that much greater. Profound, truly. I think the way you wrote this chapter was brilliant and Thomas is an exceptional character. Well done with him.

The idea of The Towers is so amazing. Like, I don't know how you came up with all of this but this world is so cool. Imagining it in my head is super fun and I think that being able to pay to watch people on earth is perfect. That is seriously the coolest thing ever. I'm just blown away by the stuff you've already done in this story and it's only the second chapter. I'm pretty speechless. And jealous. This is phenomenal.

So you're crazy when you doubt the quality. This is my favorite story right now. I need more of it (and I know you're hoarding chapters!). But in all seriousness - this was perfection. Just as I knew it would be.

UGH I HATE YOU THIS IS SO GOOD.
also wtf why are you updating now it's still November stawp already.

Ugh damn it Thomas is making me sad you suck this is great this has been a public service announcement.

This is one of the best, most creative ideas I've ever seen on here! I love the idea and I'm absolutely intrigued to find out more about Oli and his quest and see if/when he gets his memories back :) Great job!

MEEPS OMFG I'M ACTUALLY SO INTERESTED
THAT WAS SUCH A MYSTERIOUS CHAPTER UGH WHY
do we have to turn off all electronics or does this story function with the use of technology (((me trying to be funny and it not working)))

OH MY GOD YES I AM SO EXCITED THIS WAS SO AMAZING!
This prologue was like poetry. I felt like I was there. The place seems so beautiful but he feels so strange so it's such an amazing balance. I'm so beyond curious as to how he died and this gruff guy. Is he going to be Oli's mentor in this place? I think he might need one.
AHHHHH THIS WAS EVEN BETTER THAN I IMAGINED IT WOULD BE!

yes pls and thank you

I'm so intrigued! You gave me so little to dwell upon until November! And now I'll have to obsess over what this story could possibly be about. So mysterious. I love it. I cannot wait. The picture for Oli on the story page looks like he's nakey. And he's a babe. We will have to motivate each other for NaNoWriMo! This is my first year entering and I refuse to back out like I've done every other year haha. Especially since I have a story this time. I can't wait for this to get started! I'm intrigued by Oli but moreso by Elena.

Excited for this!

Um yes Oli looks really hot so you should start this.

From the summary, the story looks like it is going to be pretty good. Can't wait till you post the first chapter.

MEEPS