Love is Foolish - Comments

@ arye.tyler
Thank you! That's cool, not all stories are right for everyone. Thanks for your honesty :)

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You're doing really well for a first time horror writer. There's a lot of psychological stuff going on in the story so far (I'm on chapter eight), and the writing style is very well-paced and engaging. It's not my thing, so I won't keep reading, but I think you've done a great job of writing a horror-romance so far. B)

Even though I have no idea who this story is about, the new comment thing they have introduced me to this story and I must say that even though I'm clueless on who this is about, it's a very very well written story and I enjoyed reading it! The gay part and "jalex" was hilarious, I was laughing my ass off when I read that :)

Can't wait for this to come out!

@ CountryGirl712
Thank you so much! I've started writing (LITTLE AUDRA IS SO CUTE AND AWW) and I'll probably start updating in around two weeks when I've finished writting :D I love you for being obsessed with this story :)

Hi it's the weird girl who's obsessed with your story again.

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE THE SEQUEL/PREQUEL/AUDRA'S POINT OF VIEW I miss Audra too and I loved this story even though it was a bit twisted but I would totally read it and my sister would too because we are both crazy about your story and we would love it if you wrote more! You are so talented! Please keep writing :)

@ CountryGirl712
Aw wow thanks! I'm glad she likes it :D

Wow wow wow!!! this is fantastic! You are a very talented writer! keep up the great work! Your characters are so well crafted, I can tell that you put in some serious time when it comes to creating them. From the very start your story is gripping. The prologue catches the readers attention and keeps it. This is something that I'm envious of, I feel like it's obvious when I'm a little bored with my writing, your story however was consistently awesome! Also, your layout is very cool. It really captures the overall mood of your story. I'm very impressed with your writing. Like I said, you are very talented! Keep up the great work!

Wow wow wow!!! this is fantastic! You are a very talented writer! keep up the great work!

Hi I know I already commented it's me countrygirl712 again, but I just wanted to say that I read this to my sister and she loves it too! <3

@ CountryGirl712
Thank you so so much for you lovely comment! I can't even begin to explain how much it means to me! You have literally made my week! :D Just thank you so much <3 and sorry for the school night thing and making you cry (I cried when I killed Audra too oops)

Okay I cried when Audra died.. I admit it

oh my god. This is absolutely incredible. Officially reccommended and suscribed. This is amazingly written. It flowed beautifully and the plot had me on the edge of my seat biting my nails and actually crying out when she hurt him. The fact that every chapter was so interesting and ended on a cliff hanger had me reading until 1:00 am on a school night. Thanks. The way you described the thoughts and feelings going throught their heads. I thought this was a n actual book so amazing. I can't give this enough praise if I could recommend this a thousand times I would, I hope that someday I will write as well as you. Please keep writing.

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well! as I've only read the first chapter before writing this, I'm very much intrigued! You've easily caught the readers attention! I'm interested to see who 'she' is! and while I'm more partial to Jalex fics than het, I'm intrigued. I will be subscribing!

Not sure quite yet. Might take me a couple days to read, bt I'm sure it'll be great!!! =p

@ twejacobbr
Aw thank you so much!!! :D what did you think?

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WOW!!! Talk about grabbing someones attention...THIS TOTALY FIT THE PART!! =) Lol. The prologue was truely incaptiving and I honestly cant wait to finnish reading this storyyy!! Really am excited! The wayyou set the main girl character up is like...wow! Your left with the feeling lf her either wanting revenge...or doing this just for fun...or wanting to prove something....i dont know but I Love that because i will obviously finish reading it!! Cant wait to see what she does and why she does it. And especially how Alex will react to all THIS!! Truely an awesome start and will comment my thoughts when Im done reading! =)

Okay, she is quite literally insane. The way she describes her plans for going after Alex really just creeps me out. And then she talks about how she's not actually insane and I'm just like "you so are". She even talks about the fans in a very creepy way. The way she says "they" makes it seem like they're a herd of cattle or something that just get in the way of her real plan. I really like that she uses her looks to try to get him closer to her, and of course it works! Alex can not resist her creepy psycho charm!

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This is really good. I usually don't read fanfics but this one has an interesting hook. I like how in the very beginning it is established that the main character has less than innocent intentions. I love the mystery in this story, I'm trying to figure out the game she is playing. The only critique I have is in the beginning the paragraphs are too short, but that doesn't take away from the story.

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Wow, this is really good. I love the suspense and the puzzle of trying to figure out who "She" is. Really nice work with the characters. I read the first few chapters and got hooked instantly. The only thing to watch out for is minor typos (it can be easily rectified by proofreading before submitting). Other than that, really, really good. I'm definitely subscribing.