Simon Says - Comments

@AJM1
Thanks! I loved writing this story! Anther one of my favorites (that still makes me cry when I read it) is Dear Zacky. I'm really glad you loved it :D
I also read your interview and I love A7X too, but I like Synacky better than Bratt :P I'm glad you liked it and thanks for commenting! *hugs*

CONGRATS ON WINNING 2ND PLACE IN THE CONTEST. I'm a huge fan of A7X and this was awesome!!! So unique and interesting. You pulled off all those personalities flawlessly. I loved little Billy and Olivia. I felt so bad for Brian being there, imagining Zacky. Your last sentence... God, its poetic! Loved this.

I don't reach that many stories with mental illness as the main theme because mostly, I just can't find the ones that are enough to pique my interest.

This piece, however, I think is very interesting. I was sitting at the edge of my seat, just wanting for Simon to come out already and I wanted to know what happen. Also, just like the person below me said, I think the way you switch from one personality to the other is cool.

Thank you for entering my contest and I'll let you know when the results are up.

Just a first comment here, the red and black writing makes it a little hard to read every so often, but that's just a layout note. It doesn't really affect anything, but there you go.

I love the various different personalities that Brian has and the way he just moves in and out. It's really cool how you've moved between moments with Brian and all the other personalities that he has. I love how there's a love story twisted in there as well, it just makes the whole thing so much more realistic and come to life in front of me . Thank you for entering my contest!

Oh my god, I did not expect that!
This is really good! I love that people are writing more distorted and twisted things! Brilliant!

TT^TT the feels...THE FEELS... *sobbing* I love this...

wow that was a twist at the end with simon being zack's dad. This is really good