Saevus Desiderium - Comments

@ Post Mortem
Thank you so much! it really means a lot

I love this story too omg! You really capture my favorite type of story to read and write. I'm on the edge of my seat waiting to find out if Ari will make it or not. Some parts of this story even made me cringe when Luke did what he did. It's not a bad thing though. That means your writing made me feel emotion and that's the best part and a very powerful thing. Great job!

Oh my goodness. Noooo ARI!! He can't die. He just can't

SHIT THIS IS TENSE.
Ari can't be dead.
Nope.
I won't believe it for a second.

Nooooooo NOOOOOOOO NOT LIKE THIS you have me in literal tears ): Ari please be okay and skylar oh my god

oh my god an update.
I don't even know where i stopped reading. this is an issue.
still, cant wait to get reading again, i missed this with angry passion <3

What?! Is Ari actually dead?! ;_;

GLAD TO SEE AN UPDATE SERIOUSLY CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE UPDATE ASAP PLEASE

Update soon please

Update asap please!

can't wait for an update:)

Update soon please!! :(

so i just re-read this story, i forgot how much i love it. i really hope ari and marshall can save skylar and kill luke. i feel so bad for skylar, she gave herself up to save their dad and keep ari happy but it seems she completely forgot how much ari loves her. I hope you update asap can't wait to see what happens. update asap (:

Omg great storryyyy <3 amaziiinggg !!!

Oh no, she's so strong though, that's the ultimate sacrifice they are so in love. Can't wait for another update

poor Skylar, i want Luke dead.

Wow :O no words! This story is great!! I hope ari come back:( please update soon<3

That was a curveball I would have never imagined that happening.

i get tingles every time i see you've updated.
This was the first story i subscribed to on mibba.

I really do love this story. Keep it up.