Saevus Desiderium - Comments

Can't wait! I'm so glad you updated

i literally fancy everyone in this story asdfghjkl

I'm still in love with this story. I LOVE YOU MARSHALL. But never Marshall over Ari. I think he's finally coming to terms with himself and that's always a good thing in my book! (: Keep updating, you're doing amazing!~

It's interesting because yes she was flirting HARD, but when is it actually okay to help someone in need and how much information do you give? I'm still absurdly in love with this story, a work of freakin art. Can't wait for more!
And life makes you busy but I'll always be reading :)

still amazing

Keep it up; this is amazing and intense!

Does anyone have any stories that are like this? I really liked it.

the story is amazing, please keep updating! (:

Omg. There needs to be more chapters. /.\

i was on the edge of my seat when they saw david :D oh god, I sure hope they escape :/

First of all (as you can tell from all my previous comments) I'm so in love with this story. This last chapter was filled with so much fluff it was cute and something they needed. But seeing David puts things into perspective. Can't wait for more!

I love the story so much. I can't wait for more.

*faints* that was hawtttt

Wowza that was hot ;)

It just keeps getting better.

Oh, I love this:)

another update WOOHOOO

YAYYYYYY! when I saw this had been updated I was dying with excitement omg, and it didn't disappoint xx well done honey, this was perfect x

FINALLY!
I mean the guy did punch him first and he's fighting for the woman he loves I mean really. Jake's an asshole and I don't think that Skylar should judge Ari harshly for this she knows what he's capable of but he was pushed to the limit.

I enjoyed the update. I can't wait for more