I really like the way you described the setting immediately, and got into details about Gotham City and what it's current state was, and talked about the fear that still lingered in the city.
I like the way you introduced Eve as well. She seems like a girl who is very bitter about what happened to her family, just like she should be, and I think it will be exciting to see how it plays out in the future for her and Bane.
I think that this story is great so far and I can’t wait to see what you do in future chapters!