Underneath The Petals - Comments

AddictiveAphrodisiac (100)

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<3

August 30th, 2013 at 01:15pm

iloveparamore013 (100)

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@ Wave-Lengths
Yeah I didn't like that when I wrote it either. I'm not really good at transitioning things. I changed it when she said it, I think, though. Thanks! :)

July 3rd, 2013 at 08:12pm

Wave-Lengths (100)

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I agree with Ballet_Girl, makes it a lil' cheesy.

July 3rd, 2013 at 05:18am

Ballet_Girl (100)

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Um I really liked it right up until the 'I've always loved you bit' in Chapter 2. Love just seems really extreme, and you hadn't really built up to it at all which make it feel a little bit unbelievable. The sex scene was really good though! Hot and realistic :)

June 23rd, 2013 at 05:10pm

Ballet_Girl (100)

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Um I really liked it right up until the 'I've always loved you bit' in Chapter 2. Love just seems really extreme, and you hadn't really built up to it at all which make it feel a little bit unbelievable. The sex scene was really good though! Hot and realistic :)

June 23rd, 2013 at 05:10pm