Redamancy - Comments

This is such a nice, cute story. I feel like there could've been a little bit more there, in terms of making me feel for the characters or narrative, but I'm not a romance person so it takes a lot to impress me in this department. However, the story just flows so well and is really sweet. I don't really have much else to say, I wish I could be a bit more constructive.

I definitely agree with Fair. Everything in this seems so warm and soft, right from the words you use to describe the scene to the colour that you've used in the background of the layout. I'm not usually a massive fan of romance in general, but this just seems so soft and gentle that I can't help but love it. The wording and flow is just perfect, everything seems to be perfect. It's almost as if not one person can touch them in that moment, and I almost feel like I'm intruding in on a really private moment between two very loved-up people. All in all, I'm definitely impressed. You've managed to melt a heart of steel, you should be pleased, haha!

I'll be announcing the winners of the contest at some point within the next week, so good luck!

To start, I like how soft the layout is. The colors are light and as I said, soft and compliment the word you chose for the contest and also the story you wrote, it's very nice and it fits together well. I would just think that there would be more dark brown in the layout, maybe as the text color or something to help it fit more with the banner but that's nothing huge.

This was really nice, I like how warm it felt, especially because you included the thing about the sun and the golden accents. I wish there was a bit more, because it felt a little empty to me but I still liked it. c:

I like this because it was very sweet. A lot of people could feel the need on redamancy. I also like that you could make the reader feel such warmth in such little words.

This is very sweet and romantic. It matches the definition in the summary very well without feeling too cutesy. I think the neutrality of the layout really helps with that and I like the sunlight through the window image matching the line in your story.

The last line seems very sudden. It just didn't seem to fit with the rest of your story. It doesn't really work for me to go from them laying together, kissing, and confessing their love to one another into this line about time being endless. There's no set up for that. I think you could actually just end on the "I love you." line and it would be perfect.

Overall, this was a nicely written drabble and although I'm not much a romance person, I found it lovely and heartwarming.