Spiralling Down - Comments

I don't read a lot of smut, and this contest has given me that chance to read it! This is hot, and so well written. I can clearly see the scene you've painted, and it makes me wish we were given more than one episode for Remy's extra curricular activities. This is fantastic!

So I literally stumbled on this by mistake and gosh I'm so happy. I looooove Remy so much (and Olivia Wilde) and this story was just great.

While I was reading I didn't see anything wrong grammar or punctuation-wise or anything that really broke up the story and I was really happy. You're a very great writer c: thanks so much for this story, it made me really happy xD