Though I have never seen Vampire Diaries, I actually really like this story. Your characters are interesting, and your descriptions are superb. I would also like to thank you for having no grammar or spelling mistakes, as that's a fairly big problem with some stories. One thing to correct is the layout of the second chapter, as some lines of dialogue aren't on there own line. It's a bit of a daunting wall of text. Seriously though, I love this story. Can't wait for the next update!
Though I have never seen Vampire Diaries, I actually really like this story. Your characters are interesting, and your descriptions are superb. I would also like to thank you for having no grammar or spelling mistakes, as that's a fairly big problem with some stories. One thing to correct is the layout of the second chapter, as some lines of dialogue aren't on there own line. It's a bit of a daunting wall of text. Seriously though, I love this story. Can't wait for the next update!