The Darings - Comments

OMG, I MISS THIS STORY….please please update soon :)

Finn's OLDER brother's acting like younger brothers haha.
Honestly, if I was a twin and the older one, I'd make sure I wouldn't let people forget it either xD
I liked that update!

HAHAHAHAHAHA FINN'S BROTHERS WOW I THINK I'M IN LOVE
THIS IS HILARIOUS
I HOPE THEY MAKE HARRY JEALOUS SOMEHOW????
THEY ARE THE BEST BESTIES OMG

OH MY GOSH WOW
WOW WOW HE KISSED HER WOW OH GOODNESS
that was wow i wish Harry would kiss me like that ehehehe
buT OMG YOU WENT TO ITALY HOW WAS IT?!

The lengths Harry is going to to avoid Ash ):
HE KISSED HER AND THEN APOLOGIZED FOR HIM BEING A WANKER, YAY.
I liked that chapter!

FINAAAAALLY STYLES GETTT ITTTT

AW NIALL SOUNDS SO SAD OMG :(((

I really love this story aw Niall and Finn :')

Aww, Niall.
I liked that chapter!

Oh man, poor Ash.
I loved that update!

Boo!! I wonder what's going on with Harry, they were doing just fine him and Ash! What a typical boy!! I really love this story! Can't wait for the next one!

OH MY GOD
THIS IS AMAZING HAHAHAHA

THE DISH SOAP OMFG I'M DYING I HONESTLY AM OMG

Just wanted to leave you a comment and express how much I enjoy this story - especially since I'm usually not a fan of stories with multiple authors. But this one, this one has an edge. And It's v relatable. At first I thought I could relate to Finn in the 'just don't talk to me, give me my coffee, am I making you nervous? I hope I'm making you nervous' way (because I'm a bit like that sometimes haha) but the more I read on, the more I realized I can relate to Ash also, because of her like of being alone, and constant wonder. I think, I'm Finn on the outside, how others perceive me, and Ash on the inside.
I don't know why I've come to your story and left a paragraph about myself, but I just wanted to applaud how well developed and relatable this story is. I read it because I was getting bored reading Defining Moment over and over (it's in the double digits)

Great story! Update when you can (:

Catherine

I liked that update!

This story is just so refreshing i love it so much

I am in love with this story. I just found it and it is so different and just...ugh. I love it. Usually with these dual author stories, one character is more inventive than the other and its rare to find one (well from my perspective) where both characters are awesome. I LOVE Finn and Ash. Please update soon. Like tomorrow? And every day after that. Love this

OH MY GOSH THEY KISSED YES FINALLY
IDEC THAT IT WAS PART OF THE GAME
OH MY GOODNESS MEEEEEPS

Ash and Harry are the cuuuutest!!!!

I'm sorry if my comment falls short tonight... I'm kind of still emotionally broken over the book "Allegiant", so

FINN ASKED HER WHAT'S GOING ON WITH HER AND HARRY, OMG.
I would hurt Finn if she made me play Truth or Dare. I don't like that game.
HARRY MADE ASH A MIXED CD.
Aww, Harry chose to kiss Ash.
I loved that update!

I NEED MORE ASAP