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  • discoveringclouds

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    This story is just so detailed and horrifying.

    I just feel sometimes they would, admist the worrying and hiding, just pray to God to get out okay.

    You're a strong writer.
    August 11th, 2013 at 06:30am
  • Hana_Hitachiin :3

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    OH NO Sad
    August 1st, 2013 at 03:55am
  • discoveringclouds

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    Oh my gosh, that's s terrifying.
    July 28th, 2013 at 03:33am
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    Molly and Conner :( how could they leave knowing that they have friends in the city? So cruel and sad
    July 27th, 2013 at 03:05pm
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    This is amazing. I think it is very hard to write a good and unique plague story since its so over-done at times, but this is so gripping. One of the best stories I have read on Mibba by far. So unique, well written and developed. I am so excited for the next chapter and to see what is to come next. I know there will be challenges but I hope Conner, Molly,
    Collin and Mona all make it out alive and as un-scared (physically that is) as they possible can.
    July 23rd, 2013 at 05:22pm
  • discoveringclouds

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    Wow your story is scary and slightly realistic. :( it scares me for our futures!
    July 21st, 2013 at 03:46pm
  • discoveringclouds

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    Whoa...this first chapter.
    July 21st, 2013 at 12:14pm
  • Hana_Hitachiin :3

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    All I have read is one chapter so far but you already have me hooked
    July 21st, 2013 at 05:06am
  • Steelshade

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    :'(((( Saaaaad.. I MAY OR MAY NOT HAVE TEARED UPPP. </3
    The pacing that the story's taking is pretty much just right for me. Not too rushed with action, and not to slow with detail. It's a good combination of both
    July 16th, 2013 at 05:55pm
  • Steelshade

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    I like how each chapter ends with a hook that keeps you clicking forward, it's working on me XD I'm so curious about everything!
    July 16th, 2013 at 05:45pm
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    The second part is equally interesting! Throughout the whole beginning, I was scared that her parents were going to become infected because they worked at the hospital. Now I'm reeeally curious about how the sickness gets spread/what the cause is
    July 16th, 2013 at 05:20pm
  • Steelshade

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    Oooooooo, the prologue is well written. It's very unique so far, I like how the first part is AFTER whatever this plague will be, gives me hope for the survival of the characters for the coming chapters, haha, when I'm, guessing I'll be reading about all of the horrific plague-times in the narrator's life. The stuff she mentions during what she imagines her children will ask her is reeeeaaaally attention-grabbing, this is really good so far :)
    July 16th, 2013 at 04:08pm