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  • lightscamerakellic

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    @collidewithmyb0ner Thank you so much my Lani, I know about the mistakes. I posted this at 5:30 am and wrote it while I was half asleep so I was supposed to proofread in the morning but I went to the beach instead. I'll proofread it now (:
    June 26th, 2013 at 03:42am
  • collidewithmyb0ner

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    this was v good, Jordy. A few grammr/spelling mistakes, but other than that, the content was actually v good. Great Job for first time smut! <3
    June 26th, 2013 at 03:32am
  • wishesinthedark

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    this was really good!
    June 26th, 2013 at 02:28am
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