Love Story (Complications) - Comments

Aww this one was sweet and a bit depressing since I considered Norman dying of old age :/ lol never a good thing... update soon!

@ Wolfy1991
You dirty girl! Lol u can't hide I'm gunna tell the world mwahahahaha

Argh I love this chapter. I love the shy was a playfulness of the pair of them. I can't wait for the actual story more an more with each addition to this :).

@ jessegdixon
Thank yooouuu! And i'm working on it :) I'm thinking just a few more one shots than I'll start the story.

@ Maddy-MarieXO
Haha Don't we all? don't we all? I totally imagine myself as Jessie when I was writing this....shhh you didn't hear anything. *hides in random whole*

@ Simplexminded
Hehe you I had to warm up to it. As for the storm I'm thinking of jut showing a little peak in one the one shots....than show the whole thing on their real story :)
Thank you again for yo awesomeness!!!

@ GeekPuddin
Thank you! :)

Love this can't wait till its an actual story :)

God dayumm! I wish I could have sex with norman like this in real life lol

Ahh. Here comes the roughness that we've not seen yet from the pair of them. A simple chapter with a huge effect :) I love how your characters are developing. But you already know this lol. Brilliant work (again) can't wait for more and this storm you promise.

Such a great story. I can't wait to read more.

I loved this character development addition. It wasn't boring at all. To see characters introduced and see how protective norman is of Jessie is fantastic. I loved how instantly calm norman became simply my talking to her.

I can't wait to hear more about her "family" and why that acceptance was so big for her. Again brilliant work.

@ Wolfy1991
I'm glad I can be so encouraging for you. I used to write myself and can understand how positivity fuels you to write more. Sadly I went the other way after a lot of negitivity.

I actually can't wait to see more of these shorts and eventually the chapters story. :)

@ Rawrliz
Thank you! And don't worry I will. But for now, like i said i Just wanna get this ideas out there. I actually have a little black leather book with a bunch of little scenes that could turn into stories. I'm just picking the best ones and putting them up :)

@ Simplexminded
You're so awesome! :D Thank yo so much for the kind words! You have no idea how much that encourages me! Trust me you will learn more as i post more of these one-shot series. Not too much though :) But when I make this into an actual story all will be reviled in time. I already got some ideas on how to start it but I won't till at least I put some more one-shots up if not finish all the little scenes I want on here.
And yes, I didn't wan it to be just sex since they really do love each other. But I also didn't want it to just be quick love making, I mean come'on we got get some kinky action right? lol
As all relationships it's more complex than that. Which as I said more will be revealed in time. I'll try to upload part 4 soon, at least within the next couple days or so.

I love it! I love understanding more about their pasts, their love for each other, their insecurities. Brilliantly written and expressed. The sex is perfectly written and it comes across as not just sex which I think is what I expect from this couple. Once again a brilliant addition to this collection of shorts. I love the addition of Mingus even though its only mentions of him. It gives you an understanding of how he feels about the relationship. Can't wait for part four :)

You made this so hot !!! I believe you should make it into a story:)

Another brilliant addition to these short stories. Only recommendation is a beta reader for you. Noticed a few typos that are easily overlooked but having another re read through or asking someone to do it for you might be a good idea.

I loved the emotion behind the pair through this second chapter. You could feel The love an list between the two. Absolutely loved it :)

I would love to see more of this story.

I love!

I look forward to reading more :)

I look forward to reading more :)

@ Simplexminded Thank yu so much for the support and kind words I appreciated :D
But yeah you will learn more about her in the future. Like i said this is just gonna b a series of one shots I had. I was thinking of writting an actual story on them. And i got plans for future chapters. i just decided to cut the first off as a tease maybe. It'll get better.
@ Maddy-MarieXO
Thank you so much! :)

Forgot to add if also like to maybe read what caused the jealousy between the pair. There are so many ways you can go with this. :) again wonderful work.