One Vial - Comments

Noooooo, the completed box now says yes
Oh hell yeah, a legit member of the Avengers!
"...or burning off your fabulous facial hair."
I feel like this chapter is just a 'hell yeah' chapter because it's such a badass way to end. Hell yeah Avengers, hell yeah flying, hell yeah in the bedroom with Tony Stark - what a fantastic way to end!
I'm sure you already know that I ridiculously enjoyed this story. No doubt I will reread it time and time again and just in general forever treasure this amazing birthday present You are the best

Just going to start off by saying how stunned I am at how the reasoning behind her powers is aliens trying to survive - never would have seen that coming, but it works so well! Argh, I was on the edge of my seat this whole chapter, it was so great! You just have to update soon so I know what the consequences of all of this is!

Oh my gosh, naked already
Wow, these powers seriously just get more awesome by the chapter, seriously I think the Avengers really need someone like that on their team
"This is really not how I’d like to get naked with Tony Stark. You know if that were ever to happen." - because we all know it's going to happen
Okay, that superhero naming part was so adorable between them The flying above the city, the dialogue, the nakedness ()... just everything came together so sweetly just then.
Spitfire is such an awesome name too - can't say I've seen that one used before for a superhero either.
Ok, those bad guys seriously need some butt kicking, so the next chapter had better have the promised action in it I'm sure you already know that this was a great update and that I loved reading it and that you have to update really soon so get to work

My gosh I am so badass in this story, talking back to Fury like that
"That totally doesn’t set your sister up as the super obvious bad guy with an evil lair." That sounds really sketchy, what the heck is Kylie up to?
Ok wow. Slightly psycho sister there... BUT I did not see that coming at all - I figured it was 'natural' or some evil organisation or even SHIELD, but her sister? Betrayal to the max!
No no no no no. You are not allowed, I repeat, not allowed to leave me with a cliffhanger like that Not fair. I expect some awesome (and romantic?) catch by Tony to follow, as well as the two going on to kick her sister's butt, but I cannot wait months to read that The wait for it will kill me. So seriously, update this story soon, I beg you!

Wow, something actually knocked Tony's confidence there for a bit. And damn right it was that awesome fire-demon-woman in his workshop
Oh my gosh, their banter is so amazing You write in information and humour so effortlessly - I'm jealous
Wait, say what? Joined the Avengers?!?! Oh my god!
Why is it hilarious to picture someone like Thor just running around behind her with a bucket of water while she (and everyone else) fights the bad guys?
“Your dancing skills are truly awe-inspiring.”
You can't leave it there! Argh, I love reading this so much, like it seriously makes me so happy because you write it so brilliantly You're too alike Tony, I think I know you said you finally know where you're taking this story, but I really have no clue what will happen next, which means you have to seriously update very soon. I cannot possibly wait another 5 months before I get to read another amazing update

Firstly I just wanna say that you are so fantastic for updating this I'm glad this will be much more active!
Marshmallows
I love the way you write Tony, I really do. And Nicole. The dialogue flows well, I feel.
Awesome chapter as always, and I can't wait to read more and find out answers because I'm craving them too!

Update again! This is amazing!

"Which is to set the place on fire of course. Oops." I love the little bits like this within the story It's a different kind of narrative, and I like that you're able to pull it off.

I MET TONY!!!!!!

I can honestly say that I didn't see that coming. Not the meeting Tony part, the boss wanting him to test her - that part. There are so many unanswered questions, like what the heck caused her power, why the boss knew, who those bad guys were, why the SHIELD number didn't work, what's going to happen next with the scotch.....

Seriously awesome chapter, really fantastic. I'm dying waiting for more, I really am, so get to it!!!

OH MY GOD ALICE UPDATE AGAIN SOON. I'M KIND OF MADLY IN LOVE WITH THIS. YOU WRITE SO WONDERFULLY.
What are you waiting for? Get to it.

Woah, that was intense, I love the fight scene, though :) Update soon.

Z-Diggy

Hands are glowing orange! Kick butt action scene! Still no idea what's in the envelope! No freakin' clue what's going to happen next! I love this story

Come on, you have other readers too dude 8 subscribers, not just me, so update. Now. Or else

I love this so far, the last sentence made me laugh, please update soon!

Don't leave it there. You can't. I need more. UPDATE NOW, WOMAN

This is gonna be fantastic!!! Super excited! I subscribed and rec'd!

POST THIS RIGHT NOW I can't believe she's even called Nicole - I'll be the whole way through because of that alone! This is just so perfect, and it's only two summary sentences