Sugar - Comments

I absolutely adored this. Your writing style and your way with describing words and actions are absolutely incredible. This was sexy, this was desperate, this was unsure, this was brilliant. Everything an underage/adult smut should be!!! <3

This was brill, omg.

I loved how reluctant and hesitant Gerard was at first. It was just too sweet, but he totally got into it, and gosh was that hot.

I also loved Frank's character in this, too, I mean he was so freaking needy and wanting for Gerard and it was brilliant in every way a fic can be.

As mentioned below, a sequel to this would be pretty awesome, but there is absolutely no pressure for one. =)

@ TechniColorScream
blehhhh, I might get around to writing a sequel, god knows when though. Thanks!

@ DeadMansTouch
the soiling something so innocent part is just how Mikey sees it, that's all! glad you liked it, though, thank you!

Ah ma gosh!!!!! This is like THE most perfect smut fic I have had the greatest pleasure of reading. It's hot!!!!! Ps I read this while at work (I work with 7 guys and had to hide it a couple of times)
I love it love it love it and would be totally pleased if you wrote a sequel

O. M. Gee! This is fan-fucking-tastic, seriously! I absolutely love everything about it... All hail the God of Smut!

This was really good c: I loved it, but I felt like Gerard did something wrong by the way it was worded at the ended with ''soiling something so innocent''. But that's probably just me :)

Anyway, this was brilliant and I really wish there was more xoxo